Sly11[Admin] Posted April 11 Report Posted April 11 We now have a member who has completed his costume build, so now we begin the written construction of this new CRL. Nuts and bolts to be fleshed out as we develop the appropriate descriptive language. FIRST DRAFT Description: Imperial armored commando, The Mandalorian Prefix: TK Detachment: First Imperial Stormtrooper Detachment Context: Star Wars the Mandalorian Season 3 Episode 23 & 24 Under the leadership of Moff Gideon, a new class of elite soldier has been trained and equipped with advanced weaponry. Highly trained in the use of multiple lethal weapons and equipped with Beskar armor and Mandalorian weaponry, makes him a formidable adversary. Required Costume Components The following costume components are present and appear as described below. General Construction Notes All components should closely match the Imperial Armored Commando from the Mandalorian season 3 episodes 23 & 24. All Armor is constructed from a rigid material such as PLA, PETG, ABS, fiberglass, plastic, resin, Sintra, vacuum-formed ABS, firm rubber, metal, or similar, unless specified otherwise in section below Armor has the appearance of thickness and depth. Helmet Lens is smoky gray or black in color. The lens must be sufficiently dark enough to obscure the costumer's eyes Two black aerators are present on each mandible end, which are dark grey color Four recessed tube stripes are present on each side of the mandibles A diamond shape black greeblie is present in the recessed mouth section between aerators The nose section is black and separates the cheek plates. The nose section has a series of stripes and a single one that links the recess presents on each cheek The upper cheek is white and has a recess line running across the nose The lower cheek is recessed and has two sections that forms a V-shape. The upper portion is black, and the lower portion is dark grey. The brow is black, protrudes from the dome and extend to the ear caps The top of the helmet is dome shaped and white color A medium grey rectangular section runs along on each side of the dome and separate the front and the rear sections. A medium grey ear cap protrudes from the main rectangular section and contain a gloss white clip greeblie. The rear section is medium grey, starts below the dome shape and has a protruding band that joins the two middle rectangular sections. There is a trapezoidal shape that protrudes and ends at the lower corner end of the middle rectangular section. A white strap is attached to the rear section of the helmet. It has teeth and a flat section Temple section on each side is black and protrudes from the dome There is a white collar around the bottom of the helmet that hides the wearer’s head OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Protruding ear section is visibly a separate piece Clip greeblies and strap are visibly separate pieces Aerators and diamond greeblie are visibly separate pieces The collar has vent oblong holes on the rear section OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Neck Seal Flight Suit Flight suit is a medium gray, may have a tint of brown and is made of cotton/cotton-blend, plain-weave material. Alternatively, it can be made of a stretch fabric for the lower pants Topstitching is same color as material One or two-piece in construction, but joining of top and bottom must not be visible when all costume components are attached. Flight suit top shows no closure method when worn. A panel must cover the front zipper if present. Flight suit top as a mandarin style collar Flight Suit has double sleeves: long sleeves with short sleeves layered on top Short sleeves have horizontal quilted ribs Long sleeves have horizontal quilted ribs visible between the short sleeves and the gauntlets. Flight Suit does not have any visible pockets, zippers or logos when all costume components are attached. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Flight suit is one piece construction OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Upper Arm piece Left The upper arm piece left is white and fixed to the suit without any visible means of attachment The upper arm piece left is rectangular and has the following features from top to bottom A large recessed rectangular shape with dark red color A raised white square at the lower right of the inside of the red colored rectangle A raised medium grey box matching the same color as the rest of the armor medium grey A recessed line OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The box has a rectangular recess at the back OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Upper Arm piece Right The upper arm piece right is white and fixed to the suit without any visible means of attachment The upper arm piece right is rectangular and has the following features from top to bottom A large recessed rectangular shape with dark red color A raised white square at the upper left of the inside of the red colored rectangle A raised medium grey box matching the same color as the rest of the armor medium grey A recessed line OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The box has a rectangular recess at the back running horizontally OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Forearm Gauntlet Left Gauntlet is white in color. various boxes on all sides are medium grey in color that matches the medium grey color of the armor Gauntlet is a clamshell-style without any visible closure methods and has seam line present on each side. The gauntlet can be divided into 4 sections: top, inner, bottom and outer sides. The top side of the gauntlet has the following features: - A white raised box with angled extremities with the following features as per references. - A trapezoidal shape with black color - A small black square shape near the wrist side - A square red shape toward the elbow extremity of the top box -Two cylinders silver color with rounded extremities - A rectangular grey box near the wristThe outer side of the gauntlet has the following feature: - A raised angled white box on which there are two medium grey shapes The inner/bottom sides are comprising: - A semi-circular shape on which multiple recessed trapezoidal shapes are present - A red square shape OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The two red colored square shapes are red illuminated The grey boxes are visibly separate parts OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Forearm Gauntlet Right Gauntlet is white in color. various boxes on all sides are medium grey in color that matches the medium grey color of the armor Gauntlet is a clamshell-style without any visible closure methods and has seam line present on each side. The gauntlet can be divided into 4 sections: top, inner, bottom and outer sides. The top of the gauntlet features three steps with the tallest at the beginning of the wearer’s elbow with the following features: - There is a red rectangle on the inner side the tallest step - A rounded Dart launcher sits in a rounded base atop of the tallest step. It is black and silver in color with a two-step cone with pointed tips. The main cone has holes representing the chambers for individual darts. - On the the edge of the second step, is a silver whipcord launcher greeblie - On the last step is a recessed display near the wearer’s wrist on which all buttons are medium grey color that matches the medium grey color of the armor. The outer side of the gauntlet has the following feature: - There is a large box on which 4 grey smaller boxes are attached - At the tip of this box, two circular ports of flame throwers are present and are silver color The inner and bottom sides are comprising: - a semi-circular shape on which multiple recessed trapezoidal shapes are present - A red square shape OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The two red colored shapes are red illuminated The outer side large white box and its grey box are visibly separate parts The whipcord launcher greeblie has a middle cylinder shape and dents on the top OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Hand Plates Hand plates are white and have three facets. Both left and right are symmetrical. A thick border is present all around the plate with a recessed rectangle in the middle section hand Plates are attached to the glove back. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Gloves Gloves are made of plain soft black leather or similar material and worn tucked into the gauntlets. Logos, designs and any other non-canon details are not visible when worn. No visible stitches are present on the top of the gloves. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Gloves are made of leather OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Chest Armor The chest armor is white and comprises of 4 distinct sections: - The lower section - The upper section - The left and right winglets The lower section extends down to overlap the abdomen armor and is attached to the upper section. It also extends to the rear under the arm pit, joining to the back section with a minimal vertical seam on each side There is a recessed medium grey section in the center of the lower section matching the medium grey color of the rest of the armor. A white raised rectangular shape with bevels is present in the middle of the grey recess A dark red oblong shape is present on the left side of the lower section A raised rectangular shape containing the ranking of the commando is present on the left side of the lower section and has the following characteristics: A raised white contour A medium grey ranking rectangle that matches the medium grey color of the armor, inside the white raised contour On the grey ranking rectangle, is present from top to bottom: A white rectangle 4 squares evenly spaced horizontally on a single row with these colors from left to right: black, dark red, light grey, dark grey 2 rectangles each having two circular shapes on them. The left rectangle has 2 large white circular shapes, the right rectangle has two smaller black circular shapes Under the ranking box is a red rectangle The upper section is a single piece with no visible seam and extend from the lower section to the back section There is V-shape in the front center of the upper section, on which is attached a raised v-shape white box On each side of the upper section are attached two raised shapes that gives the appearance of jetpack straps Over the wearer’s right jetpack strap is a rounded shape box. There is a medium grey grid at the front of the box that closely match the color of the rest of the medium grey of the armor. The left and right winglets are white and symmetrical. They are attached on each side of the upper section OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The 4 sections (lower section, upper section and 2 winglets) and shoulder box are visibly separate parts The ranking box components have thickness and are visibly separate parts The red light is functional under the ranking box The raised box over the right shoulder is visibly a separate part and has two semicircular recessed line on the outer side and a recessed on the inner side. The raised box grid has exactly 5 vertical rectangular grey shapes and is visibly a separate part OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Back Armor The back is white and attaches to the upper portion of the chest armor with minimal joint. It also attaches to the lower section of the chest armor under the arm pit forming a minimal vertical joint The back armor also attaches the jetpack to the armor with a removable mechanism The backplate extends down approximately to the height of the jetpack reactors tips. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The jetpack has 3 attachment points that are visibly separate parts and are metallic finish. The two upper attachment points are circular T-shaped and anchored to the backplate with a circular plate The lower attachment point to the jetpack is cylindrical with a taper at the tip and is anchored to the backplate with a rectangular plate OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Jet Pack All grey parts on the jetpack should be medium grey color matching the medium grey of the rest of the armor. The jetpack has anchoring points to attach to the back armor and is removable The jetpack has a recess to wrap around the back armor and hide the anchoring points when viewed from the side The Jet pack consists of a main body and two side reactors all white color. The main body is thicker than the side reactors The main body comprises the following features from top to bottom: - A black intake with grills matching the outer shape of the main body. Inside the grill is a visible red shape - A rectangular grey shape with chamfered top and bottom edges centered on the main body and extending up to the start of the grills. - A cavity in which a grey and white plate is placed. Both the and white portions of the plates have two rectangular shapes present. - A white exhaust vent grill at the bottom The side reactors are symmetrical and have the following features from top to bottom: - An angled top - A large box with tapered top and 4 recessed cavities - 5 vertical cylinders attached atop of the large box - A small rectangular grey shape directly underneath the large box with two recesses, creating 3 sections - 2 small trapezoidal grey stabilizing fins located on the outside of each reactor - black directional thrusters, recessed into the bottom of the side reactors OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): All grey and black components are visibly separate parts The top grill has a functional red lighting The bottom grill is visibly a separate part OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Abdomen Armor The abdomen armor is grey and span from the belt to the inside of the chest armor, hiding the wearers suit There is a seam on the right side of the wearer that closes the two parts without a visible gap. A seam can also be present on the left side but without any visible gap. There is the appearance of 4 straps seamlessly attached to the armor There is one raised shape at the back of the abdomen armor in between the 2 rear straps There are multiple raised boxes and shapes present on the front side of the armor OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The abdomen armor is made of flexible material Only one seam is present on the right side of the wearer’s side The 4 straps are all identical in width and geometry There is the appearance of a clip on the straps approximately at the middle of the abdomen armor OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Cod Plate The cod plate is white and is made of a triangular shape that curves inward in the lower extremity The main triangular section is completed by two small vertical sections curving inward on each side The cod plate has not visible attachment method and disappear under the belt and abdominal armor. There is no attachment of the lower portion of the cod to the suit OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): There is a visible trapezoidal raised section on the top of main triangular section Belt Belt proper is made of white coton like material and has the appearance of being made with thick material stitched with 5 horizontal lines creating 4 wider section in the middle and two narrow ones at bottom and top The belt is attached to the abdomen armor with no visible mean of attachment, concealing the edge of the lower abdomen armor. The buckle of the belt is visibly two separate parts white in color. The male portion of the buckle has a visible link to the female buckle that is trapezoidal with metal color There are boxes on each side of the buckle attached to the belt strap. All boxes are white and are attached as per reference images. There are 7 identical rectangular boxes with a recess on the front vertical edges and a small chamfer on the top. 4 of these are attached to the wearer’s right and 3 on wearer’s left starting from the buckle. All are evenly spaced. There is a larger pouch on wearer’s left following the first 3 boxes. The pouch has the appearance of an overlapping rounded cover. The top cover has two horizontal chamfer on each side and the lower edges are chamfered vertically. There are two cylindrical boxes aligned with the abdominal rear straps on each side of the wearer’s back. The cylindrical boxes have an angled top and a fin protruding on the lower portion. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The push release button of the female buckle is visibly a separate component There is a rectangular recessed line on the metal portion of the male buckle The metal portion of the male buckle is followed by a black section entering the female buckle Holster The holster is white and made from synthetic. A rigid frame may be used under this to give it the proper shape around the pistol but must not be visible. Features two retention straps with a snap button closure to secure the blaster pistol. The front loop attaches approximately under first box on the left side of the wearers. The back loop attaches approximately under the 4th boxes of the wearer’s left. The two loops joint together to form a singe v-shape above the holster. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Thigh Armor Plates The thigh plates are white with a dark red insert and wrap around the wearer’s thigh with no visible mean of attachment. The left and right thigh plates are symmetrical. They have a top rectangular section that is aligned with wearer’s side. The thigh plates are curved to fit the leg shape and have rounded corners There is recessed shape that creates a contour along the periphery and leaves a rectangular shape in the center The red insert is trapezoidal OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The main section is asymmetric and is larger at the rear of the wearer’s thigh than at the front. The front top section is rectangular and the rear top section is at a downward angle OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Knee plates The knee plates are white and fitted over the wearer’s knee with no visible mean of attachment. The left and right knee plates are symmetrical and comprise 4 sections (top, inner, outer, lower) There is a recessed trapezoidal shape in the lower section There is a trapezoidal winglet attached on the outer section Greaves The greaves are white and have the spat seamlessly attached to it. The left and right greaves are symmetrical. There is a flat face at the front and at the rear running from the spat all the way up to the top of the greaves If seams are present, they must be minimal and be located on the edge of front and rear flat portions A raised lip is present around the top of the greave A rectangular box is seamlessly attached to the outer top side of the greave. The top and bottom of the box are angled A smaller box, aligned vertically with the top box is attached to the spat A rectangular box is attached at the rear of the spat and finishes at an angle on the greave OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The greave is a single piece construction with a seam only present at the rear which overlaps to the outside. The rear spat box has a recess edge on the outside creating a smaller shape. The spat overlaps the boot with minimal gap. OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): Boots FO style boot Sole is black rubber with no visible heel There are no visible buckles or laces The instep has stiches that run across and creates multiple sections OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): There are 3 stitches lines that run across the instep. The instep is made of thick material with the stiched lines creating raised sections. There is a vertical zipper on the inside that spans the height of the boot. OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): OFFICER COMPONENTS Optional Accessories Blaster Pistol Pistol blaster may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando pistol blaster Details to be painted black and metallic per reference photos. Rifle blaster Rifle may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando rifle blaster Details to be painted black and metallic per reference photos. 2 Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted April 11 Report Posted April 11 (edited) Thanks for starting the thread. Here are some proposal to adjust the titles: - Spats and greaves armor are a single piece for this armor, so they should be combined - Shoulder winglets are parts of the chest armor, so they probably should be combined As for the helmet, here is a proposal for the description: Level 1 - Lens is smoky gray or black in color. The lens must be sufficiently dark enough to obscure the costumer's eyes - Two black aerators are present on each mandible end, which are dark grey color - four recessed tube stripes are present on each side of the mandibles - A diamond shape black greeblie is present in the recessed mouth section between aerators - The nose section is black and separates the cheek plates. The nose section has a series of stripes and a single one that links the recess presents on each cheek - The upper cheek is white and has a recess line running across the nose - The lower cheek is recessed and has two sections that forms a V-shape. The upper portion is black and the lower portion is dark grey. - The brow is black, protrudes from the dome and extend to the ear caps - The top of the helmet is dome shaped and white color - A medium grey rectangular section runs along on each side of the dome and separate the front and the rear sections. - A medium grey ear cap protrudes from the main rectangular section and contain a gloss white clip greeblie. - The rear section is medium grey, starts below the dome shape and has a protruding band that joins the two middle rectangular sections. There is trapezoidal shape that protrudes and ends at the lower corner end of the middle rectangular section. - A white strap is attached to the rear section of the helmet. It has teeth and a flat section - Temple section on each side is black and protrudes from the dome - There is a white collar around the bottom of the helmet that hides the wearer’s head Level two - Protruding ear section is visibly a separate piece - Clip greeblies and strap are visibly separate pieces - Aerators and diamond greeblie are visibly separate pieces - The collar has vent oblong holes on the rear section Edited April 16 by Sithtrooper02 1 Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted April 11 Report Posted April 11 For the general CRL info, I would propose a slightly different name to distinguish from the animated series, like Wookieepedia already describes: Description: Imperial armored commando, The Mandalorian Prefix: TK Detachment: First Imperial Stormtrooper Detachment Context: Star Wars the Mandalorian Season 3 Episode 23 & 24 Under the leadership of Moff Gideon, a new class of elite soldier has been trained and equipped with advanced weaponry. Highly trained in the use of multiple lethal weapons and equipped with beskar armor and Mandalorian weaponry, makes him a formidable adversary. For general construction notes, I would mention the following, as the armor can be made out of 3D printed, resin, vacuum formed parts. - All components should closely match the Imperial Armored Commando from the Mandalorian season 3 episodes 23 & 24. - All Armor is constructed from a rigid material such as PLA, PETG, ABS, fiberglass, plastic, resin, Sintra, vacuum-formed ABS, firm rubber, metal, or similar, unless specified otherwise in section below - Armor has the appearance of thickness and depth. 1 Quote
revlimiter[Staff] Posted April 12 Report Posted April 12 I believe the upcoming 2025 Black Series figure is also called the Imperial Armored Commando. Of course, there's no box yet but that's how the news sites are listing it. Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted April 12 Author Report Posted April 12 Title updated to reflect Imperial Armored Commando. 1 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted April 12 Author Report Posted April 12 Do we have enough visible evidence to call out "Satin" paint finish for basic level? We deal in absolutes where possible based on information available to the open public, then only use BTS knowledge to fill in gaps. Here say and guess work is what we do spend a fair bit of time on Let's get some feedback from staff and members on this. If it looks like a satin finish, let's get some consensus, please. Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted April 12 Report Posted April 12 Agreed, let’s not specify specific level of gloss in this document as to my opinion reviewing the reference pictures, there is not sufficient evidence to support the level of reflectivity as there are no crisp pictures that would give definite answers. The various paint colors are all reflective, but gloss level is better not be specified in basic level. Will remove from proposal above 2 Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted April 15 Report Posted April 15 (edited) Hi, Here are proposal for other armor components, trying to list details that are referenced in the reference picture document available. Chest armor The chest armor is white and is comprised of 4 distinct sections: - The lower section - The upper section - The left and right winglets The lower section extends down to overlap the abdomen armor and is attached to the upper section. It also extends to the rear under the arm pit, joining to the back section with a minimal vertical seam on each side There is a recessed medium grey section in the center of the lower section matching the medium grey color of the rest of the armor. A white raised rectangular shape with bevels is present in the middle of the grey recess A dark red oblong shape is present on the left side of the lower section A raised rectangular shape containing the ranking of the commando is present on the left side of the lower section and has the following characteristics: - A raised white contour - A medium grey ranking rectangle that matches the medium grey color of the armor, inside the white raised contour - On the grey ranking rectangle, is present from top to bottom: - A white rectangle - 4 squares evenly spaced horizontally on a single row with these colors from left to right: black, dark red, light grey, dark grey - 2 rectangles each having two circular shapes on them. The left rectangle has 2 large white circular shapes, the right rectangle has two smaller black circular shapes under the ranking box is a red rectangle The upper section is a single piece with no visible seam and extend from the lower section to the back section There is V-shape in the front center of the upper section, on which is attached a raised v-shape white box On each side of the upper section are attached two raised shapes that gives the appearance of jetpack straps Over the wearer’s right jetpack strap is a rounded shape box. There is a medium grey grid at the front of the box that closely match the color of the rest of the medium grey of the armor. The left and right winglets are white and symmetrical. They are attached on each side of the upper section Level 2 The 4 sections (lower section, upper section and 2 winglets) and shoulder box are visibly separate parts The ranking box components have thickness and are visibly separate parts The red light is functional under the ranking box The raised box over the right shoulder is visibly a separate part and has two semi-circular recessed line on the outer side and a recessed on the inner side. The raised box grid has exactly 5 vertical rectangular grey shapes and is visibly a separate part Back armor The back is white and attaches to the upper portion of the chest armor with minimal joint. It also attaches to the lower section of the chest armor under the arm pit forming a minimal vertical joint The back armor also attaches the jetpack to the armor with a removable mechanism The back plate extends down approximately to the height of the jetpack reactors tips Level 2 The jetpack has 3 attachment points that are visibly separate parts and are metallic finish. The two upper attachment points are circular T-shaped and anchored to the back plate with a circular plate The lower attachment point to the jetpack is cylindrical with a taper at the tip and is anchored to the back plate with a rectangular plate Upper arm piece left The upper arm piece left is white and fixed to the suit without any visible means of attachment The upper arm piece left is rectangular and has the following features from top to bottom - A large recessed rectangular shape with dark red color - A raised white square at the lower right of the inside of the red colored rectangle - A raised medium grey box matching the same color as the rest of the armor medium grey - A recessed line Level 2 The box has a rectangular recess at the back Upper arm piece right The upper arm piece right is white and fixed to the suit without any visible means of attachment The upper arm piece right is rectangular and has the following features from top to bottom - A large recessed rectangular shape with dark red color - A raised white square at the upper left of the inside of the red colored rectangle - A raised medium grey box matching the same color as the rest of the armor medium grey - A recessed line Level 2 The box has a rectangular recess at the back running horizontally Gloves Gloves are made of plain soft black leather or similar material and worn tucked into the gauntlets. Logos, designs and any other non-canon details are not visible when worn. No visible stiches are present on the top of the gloves Level 2 Gloves are made of leather Glove armor Glove armor is white and has three facets. Left and right glove armor are symmetrical A thick border is present all around the glove armor with a recessed rectangle in the middle section The glove armor is attached to the glove back Abdomen armor The abdomen armor is grey and span from the belt to the inside of the chest armor, hiding the wearers suit There is a seam on the right side of the wearer that closes the two parts without a visible gap. A seam can also be present on the left side but without any visible gap. There is the appearance of 4 straps seamlessly attached to the armor There is one raised shape at the back of the abdomen armor in between the 2 rear straps There are multiple raised boxes and shapes present on the front side of the armor Level2 The abdomen armor is made of flexible material Only one seam is present on the right side of the wearer’s side The 4 straps are all identical in width and geometry There is the appearance of a clip on the straps approximately at the middle of the abdomen armor Belt Belt strap is made of white coton like material and has the appearance of being made with thick material stitched with 5 horizontal lines creating 4 wider section in the middle and two narrow ones at bottom and top The belt is attached to the abdomen armor with no visible mean of attachment and conceal the edge of the lower abdomen armor The buckle of the belt is visibly two separate parts white in color. The male portion of the buckle has a visible link to the female buckle that is trapezoidal with metal color There are boxes on each side of the buckle attached to the belt strap. All boxes are white and are attached as on reference pictures order There are 7 identical rectangular boxes with a visible recess on the front vertical edges and a small chamfer on the top 4 of the 7 boxes are attached to the wearer’s right and 3 on wearer’s left starting from the buckle and are evenly spaced There is a larger pouch on wearer’s left following the first 3 boxes. The pouch has the appearance of having an overlapping rounded cover. The top cover has two horizontal chamfer on each side and the lower edges are chamfered vertically. There are two cylindrical boxes aligned with the abdominal rear straps on each side of the wearer’s back. The cylindrical boxes have an angled top and a fin protruding on the lower portion Level 2 The push release button of the female buckle is visibly a separate component There is a rectangular recessed line on the metal portion of the male buckle The metal portion of the male buckle is followed by a black section entering the female buckle Cod plate The cod plate is white and is made of a triangular shape that curves inward in the lower extremity The main triangular section is completed by two small vertical sections curving inward on each side The cod plate has not visible attachment method and disappear under the belt and abdominal armor. There is no attachment of the lower portion of the cod to the suit Level 2 There is a visible trapezoidal raised section on the top of main triangular section Thigh plates The thigh plates are white with a dark red insert and wrap around the wearer’s thigh with no visible mean of attachmentThe left and right thigh plates are symmetrical. They have a top rectangular section that is aligned with wearer’s side. The thigh plates are curved to fit the leg shape and have rounded corners There is recessed shape that creates a contour along the periphery and leaves a rectangular shape in the center The red insert is trapezoidal Level 2 The main section is asymmetric and is larger at the rear of the wearer’s thigh than at the front. the front top section is rectangular and the rear top section is at a downward angle Knee plates The knee plates are white and fitted over the wearer’s knee with no visible mean of attachment The left and right knee plates are symmetrical and comprise 4 sections (top, inner, outer, lower) There is a recessed trapezoidal shape in the lower section There is a trapezoidal winglet attached on the outer section Greaves The greaves are white and have the spat seamlessly attached to it. The left and right greaves are symmetrical. There is a flat face at the front and at the rear the rear running from the spat all the way up to the top of the greaves If seams are present, they must be minimal and be located on the edge of front and rear flat portions A raised lip is present around the top of the greave A rectangular box is seamlessly attached to the outer top side of the greave. The top and bottom of the box are angled A smaller box, aligned vertically with the top box is attached to the spat A rectangular box is attached at the rear of the spat and finishes at an angle on the greave Level 2 The greave is a single piece construction with a seam only present at the rear and overlaps to the inside of the greave The rear spat box has a recess edge on the outside creating a smaller shape The spat overlaps the boot with minimal gap Boots FO style boot Sole is black rubber with no visible heel No visible buckles or laces The instep has stiches that run across and creates multiple sections Level 2 There are 3 stitches lines that run across the instep The instep is made of thick material and the stitches create obvious raised sections There is a vertical zipper on the inside that spans the height of the boot Hope this will be helpful! Edited April 16 by Sithtrooper02 1 Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted April 16 Report Posted April 16 (edited) Here are some additions to the proposal list above: Holster Holster is made from white leather or synthetic leather. A rigid frame may be used under the leather/synthetic leather to give it the proper shape around the pistol but must not be visible. Features two retention straps with a snap button closure to secure the blaster pistol The front loop attaches approximately under first box on the left side of the wearers The back loop attaches approximately under the 4th boxes of the wearer’s left The two loops joint together to form a singe v-shape above the holster Balaclava/ neck seal A balaclava is a black head sock/hood that is worn under the helmet and is used primarily to hide any view of the wearer’s skin and/or facial hair. Right Gauntlet Gauntlet is white in color. various boxes on all sides are medium grey in color that matches the medium grey color of the armor Gauntlet is a clamshell-style without any visible closure methods and has seam line present on each side. The gauntlet can be divided into 4 sections: top, inner, bottom and outer sides. The top of the gauntlet features three steps with the tallest at the beginning of the wearer’s elbow with the following features: - There is a red rectangle on the inner side the tallest step - A rounded Dart launcher sits in a rounded base atop of the tallest step. It is black and silver in color with a two-step cone with pointed tips. The main cone has holes representing the chambers for individual darts. - On the the edge of the second step, is a silver whipcord launcher greeblie - On the last step is a recessed display near the wearer’s wrist on which all buttons are medium grey color that matches the medium grey color of the armor The outer side of the gauntlet has the following feature: - There is a large box on which 4 grey smaller boxes are attached - At the tip of this box, two circular ports of flame throwers are present and are silver color The inner and bottom sides are comprising: - a semi-circular shape on which multiple recessed trapezoidal shapes are present - A red square shape Level 2 The two red colored shapes are red illuminated The outer side large white box and its grey box are visibly separate parts The whipcord launcher greeblie has a middle cylinder shape and dents on the top Left Gauntlet Gauntlet is white in color. various boxes on all sides are medium grey in color that matches the medium grey color of the armor Gauntlet is a clamshell-style without any visible closure methods and has seam line present on each side. The gauntlet can be divided into 4 sections: top, inner, bottom and outer sides. The top side of the gauntlet has the following feature: - a white raised box with angled extremities with the following features o On angled extremity, there is a trapezoidal shape with black color o A small black square shape near the wrist side o A square red shape toward the elbow extremity of the top box - Two cylinders silver color with rounded extremities - A rectangular grey box near the wrist The outer side of the gauntlet has the following feature: - A raised angled white box on which there are two medium grey shapes The inner/bottom sides are comprising: - A semi-circular shape on which multiple recessed trapezoidal shapes are present - A red square shape Level 2 The two red colored square shapes are red illuminated The grey boxes are visibly separate parts Jetpack All grey parts on the jetpack should be medium grey color matching the medium grey of the rest of the armor. The jetpack has anchoring points to attach to the back armor and is removable The jetpack has a recess to wrap around the back armor and hide the anchoring points when viewed from the side The Jet pack consists of a main body and two side reactors all white color. The main body is thicker than the side reactors The main body comprises the following features from top to bottom: - A black intake with grills matching the outer shape of the main body. Inside the grill is a visible red shape - A rectangular grey shape with chamfered top and bottom edges centered on the main body and extending up to the start of the grills. - A cavity in which a grey and white plate is placed. The grey portion of the plate has two rectangular shapes and the white portion has also two rectangular shapes - A white exhaust vent grill at the bottom The side reactors are symmetrical and have the following features from top to bottom: - An angled top - A large box with tapered top and 4 recessed cavities - 5 vertical cylinders attached atop of the large box - A small rectangular grey shape directly underneath the large box with two recesses, creating 3 sections - 2 small trapezoidal grey stabilizing fins located on the outside of each reactor - black directional thrusters, recessed into the bottom of the side reactors Level 2 All grey and black components are visibly separate parts The top grill has a functional red lighting The bottom grill is visibly a separate part Flight suit Flight suit is a medium gray, may have a tint of brown and is made of cotton/cotton-blend, plain-weave material. Alternatively, it can be made of a stretch fabric for the lower pants Topstitching is same color as material One or two-piece in construction, but joining of top and bottom must not be visible when all costume components are attached. Flight suit top shows no closure method when worn. A panel must cover the front zipper if present. Flight suit top as a mandarin style collar Flight Suit has double sleeves: long sleeves with short sleeves layered on top Short sleeves have horizontal quilted ribs Long sleeves have horizontal quilted ribs visible between the short sleeves and the gauntlets. Flight Suit does not have any visible pockets, zippers or logos when all costume components are attached. Level 2 Flight suit is one piece construction Alternate stretch fabric Optional Accessories Pistol blaster Pistol blaster may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando pistol blaster Details to be painted black and metallic per reference photos. Rifle blaster Pistol blaster may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando rifle blaster Details to be painted black and metallic per reference photos. Edited April 18 by Sithtrooper02 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted April 16 Report Posted April 16 What has been done in the past is to add a reference to support the text, especially for questionable areas or items and especially when we are putting a requirement on pieces/details of a particular piece. I've not had time to delve deep into this CRL at this stage as I have a convention next month and trying to get some items finished. Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted April 16 Report Posted April 16 (edited) 5 hours ago, gmrhodes13 said: What has been done in the past is to add a reference to support the text, especially for questionable areas or items and especially when we are putting a requirement on pieces/details of a particular piece. I've not had time to delve deep into this CRL at this stage as I have a convention next month and trying to get some items finished. Hi! Thanks for the feedback! i can certainly place specific images directly in the text for detailed areas if preferred. for ease of reading I thought it would be better to have a separate picture document. all the reference here are supported by the screenshots of the document in the gallery season 3 section in which I separated each armor section with multiple images for each. https://docs.google.com/file/d/1kyFo-slANYcMenbP4R1iwSTxfOJ2AJoJ/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword this is a detailled proposal in which I though of placing details, but if you prefer to have a more general document just remove the details references. Edited April 16 by Sithtrooper02 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted April 16 Report Posted April 16 58 minutes ago, Sithtrooper02 said: Hi! Thanks for the feedback! i can certainly place specific images directly in the text for detailed areas if preferred. for ease of reading I thought it would be better to have a separate picture document. all the reference here are supported by the screenshots of the document in the gallery season 3 section in which I separated each armor section with multiple images for each. https://docs.google.com/file/d/1kyFo-slANYcMenbP4R1iwSTxfOJ2AJoJ/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword this is a detailled proposal in which I though of placing details, but if you prefer to have a more general document just remove the details references. It's much easier to add reference with the text rather than going off forum looking for a specific image, makes it easy to follow. It's also good for later when referring back to the CRL creation and updating when new reference material comes around. 2 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted April 16 Author Report Posted April 16 This is of tremendous help so far Francois. I'll start to add text into the first post but we can continue to look at and discuss references to bring this up to where it needs to be so we can present it to the LMO team in the near future. Glen has a good point with the reference images , they certainly are our guide to written text and description. Keep up the stellar work on this. Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted May 1 Author Report Posted May 1 I would also like to add, once we have covered off all these parts and some feedback on wording etc, I would like to add a separate section for the Officer version with the additional red detail and blaster variant. I think because they are so close, we could have both covered in this one CRL with a few caveats indicating what is worn with what, but effectively 2 costumes. If we have enough feedback to show a separate CRL should be created specifically for the officer version, then that is also a viable option and an easy enough CRL build, providing we have someone willing to make those additional pieces and build an officer. Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted May 4 Report Posted May 4 Hi, Small correction proposed to the first draft, Looking closely at the greaves, the level 2 should read 'The greave is a single piece construction with a seam only present at the rear which overlaps to the OUTSIDE' As per reference pictures below: 1 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted May 5 Report Posted May 5 Had a few minutes spare this morning, a couple of things. I'm not sure if it has been mentioned, came up in one of the build groups, sewn lines on the long sleeves are only on the outside. OPTIONAL L2 Long sleeves do not have horizontal quilted ribs on the inside of the arm between the short sleeves and the gauntlets Blaster OPTIONAL L2 3-D printed blasters can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a more realistic appearance Handle should have a molded/curved appearance From TFA onwards we've added electronics to CRLs OPTIONAL L3 Must have working red barrel light I'll find a better reference Rifle blaster Rifle may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando rifle blaster Details to be painted black and metallic per reference photos. OPTIONAL L2 3-D printed blasters can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a more realistic appearance OPTIONAL L3 Must have working red barrel light Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted May 5 Author Report Posted May 5 Perfect, thanks Glen. I'll look to update on those over the next day or so. Quote
Sithtrooper02[TK] Posted May 10 Report Posted May 10 (edited) To follow up on the above modification proposal , since the 3D printing is going to be used for the armor, I would suggest that the following general construction note be added similar to other detachments CRL : - 3D printed armor must be finished without any visible print lines for the flight suit long sleeve single sided exterior stitching proposal, I would propose to move this requirement to level 2, as it is not an obvious detail and even on reference pictures it is subtile . Some suits made with stretch material even seem not to have any stitch Edited May 10 by Sithtrooper02 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted May 11 Author Report Posted May 11 We will definitely have that in the CRL, both for armour and weapons. Once I have the Wiki Origin document set up with the layout, those messages will be added in and examples will be posted, so all can see how the CRL will start to look as a finished product. 1 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted May 25 Author Report Posted May 25 Little update Wiki Doc is fully constructed and images slowly being added. Construction of the CRL is well underway, but this draft is still up for review, not final by any means. Some changes have already been made from the first post draft, as I read through and re-word some items, so the language is familiar to other FISD CRL's. I will post a revised full version in the near future for further scrutiny before we submit to the LMO team for their review. They also may request further changes. 1 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted May 28 Author Report Posted May 28 UPDATE: The Wiki platform that CRL's are created on is currently having several issues. This is preventing us from logging into the documents and continuing to add text and images to new CRL's. I am waiting on updates from the LWM and LMO teams, but currently have no time frame on access. Hoping it's resolved this week, so I can get this one complete and into the hands of the LMO's 2 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted June 2 Author Report Posted June 2 UPDATE REVISION 2 OPEN FOR FEEDBACK Second draft with changes to written descriptions. Still a few items out of place requiring repositioning, but this is why we do updates. Please feel free to offer suggestions. CRL Header info Under the leadership of Moff Gideon, a new class of elite soldier has been formed from remnant Imperial troops still loyal to the cause. Highly trained in the use of multiple advanced lethal Mandalorian weaponry and clad with Beskar armor, makes them a formidable adversary. Helmet The lens is smoky gray or black in color. The lens must be sufficiently dark enough to obscure the costumer's eyes. Two black aerators are present on each mandible end, which are dark grey color. Four recessed tube stripes are present on each side of the mandibles. A diamond shape black greeblie is present in the recessed mouth section between aerators. The nose section is black and separates the cheek plates. The nose section has a series of stripes and a single one that links the recess presents on each cheek. The upper cheek is white and has a recess line running across the nose. The lower cheek is recessed and has two sections that forms a V-shape. The upper portion is black, and the lower portion is dark grey. The brow is black, protrudes from the dome and extend to the ear caps. The top of the helmet is dome shaped and white color. A medium grey rectangular section runs along on each side of the dome and separate the front and the rear sections. A medium grey ear cap protrudes from the main rectangular section and contain a gloss white clip greeblie. The rear section is medium grey, starts below the dome shape and has a protruding band that joins the two middle rectangular sections. There is a trapezoidal shape that protrudes and ends at the lower corner end of the middle rectangular section. A white strap is attached to the rear section of the helmet. It has teeth and a flat section. Temple section on each side is black and protrudes from the dome. There is a white collar around the bottom of the helmet that hides the wearer’s head. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Protruding ear section is visibly a separate piece. Clip greeblies and strap are visibly separate pieces. Aerators and diamond greeblie are visibly separate pieces. The collar has vent with oblong holes on the rear section. Balaclava A black balaclava must be fitted to the wearer, and extend from the base of the neck to conceal the entire neck chin and ears. No hair or skin should be visible around these areas. Flight Suit Flight suit is a medium gray, may have a tint of brown and is made of cotton/cotton-blend, plain-weave material. Alternatively, it can be made of a stretch fabric for the lower pants. Top stitching is same color as material. One or two-piece in construction, but joining of top and bottom must not be visible when all costume components are attached. Flight suit top shows no closure method when worn. A panel must cover the front zipper if present. Flight suit top as a mandarin style collar. Flight Suit has double sleeves: long sleeves with short sleeves layered on top. Short sleeves have horizontal quilted ribs. Long sleeves have horizontal quilted ribs visible between the short sleeves and the gauntlets. Flight Suit does not have any visible pockets, zippers or logos when all costume components are attached. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Flight suit is one-piece construction. Chest Plate The chest armor is white and comprises of 4 distinct sections. The lower section. The upper section. The left and right winglets. The lower section extends down to overlap the abdomen armor and is attached to the upper section. It also extends to the rear under the arm pit, joining to the back section with a minimal vertical seam on each side. There is a recessed medium grey section in the center of the lower section matching the medium grey color of the rest of the armor. A white raised rectangular shape with bevels is present in the middle of the grey recess. A dark red oblong shape is present on the left side of the lower section A raised rectangular shape containing the ranking of the commando is present on the left side of the lower section and has the following characteristics. A raised white contour A medium grey ranking rectangle that matches the medium grey color of the armor, inside the white raised contour. On the grey ranking rectangle, is present from top to bottom: A white rectangle 4 squares evenly spaced horizontally on a single row with these colors from left to right: black, dark red, light grey, dark grey. 2 rectangles each having two circular shapes on them. The left rectangle has 2 large white circular shapes, the right rectangle has two smaller black circular shapes. Under the ranking box is a red rectangle. The upper section is a single piece with no visible seam and extend from the lower section to the back section. There is V-shape in the front center of the upper section, on which is attached a raised v-shape white box. On each side of the upper section are attached two raised shapes that gives the appearance of jetpack straps. Over the wearer’s right jetpack strap is a rounded shape box. There is a medium grey grid at the front of the box that closely match the color of the rest of the medium grey of the armor. The left and right winglets are white and symmetrical. They are attached on each side of the upper section at the shoulder area. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The 4 sections (lower section, upper section and 2 winglets) and shoulder box are visibly separate parts The ranking box components have thickness and are visibly separate parts. The raised box over the right shoulder is visibly a separate part and has two semi-circular recessed line on the outer side and a recessed on the inner side The raised box grid has exactly 5 vertical rectangular grey shapes and is visibly a separate part OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): The red light is functional under the ranking box. Bacplate The back is white and attaches to the upper portion of the chest armor with minimal joint. It also attaches to the lower section of the chest armor under the arm pit forming a minimal vertical joint. The back armor also attaches the jetpack to the armor with a removable mechanism. The backplate extends down approximately to the height of the jetpack reactors tips. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The jetpack has 3 attachment points that are visibly separate parts and are metallic finish. The two upper attachment points are circular T-shaped and anchored to the backplate with a circular plate. The lower attachment point to the jetpack is cylindrical with a taper at the tip and is anchored to the backplate with a rectangular plate. Jetpack All grey parts on the jetpack should be medium grey color matching the medium grey of the rest of the armor. The jetpack is removable via 3 anchoring points attached to the back plate. The jetpack has a recess to wrap around the back plate concealing anchoring points when viewed from the side. The Jet pack consists of a main body and two side reactors white in color. The main body is thicker than the side reactors. The main body comprises the following features from top to bottom A black intake with grills matching the outer shape of the main body. Inside the grill is a visible red shape A rectangular grey shape with chamfered top and bottom edges centered on the main body and extending up to the start of the grills. A cavity in which a grey and white plate is placed. Both the and white portions of the plates have two rectangular shapes present. A white exhaust vent grill at the bottom The side reactors are symmetrical and have the following features from top to bottom: An angled top. A large box with tapered top and 4 recessed cavities. 5 vertical cylinders attached atop of the large box. A small rectangular grey shape directly underneath the large box with two recesses, creating 3 sections. 2 small trapezoidal grey stabilizing fins located on the outside of each reactor. Black directional thrusters, recessed into the bottom of the side reactors. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): All grey and black components are visibly separate parts. The bottom grill is visibly a separate part OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): The top grill has a functional red lighting Bicep Piece Left/Right LEFT The left Bicep piece is white and fixed to the suit without any visible means of attachment. The piece is rectangular and has the following features from top to bottom. A large recessed rectangular shape with dark red color. A raised white square at the lower right of the inside of the red colored rectangle. A raised medium grey box matching the same color as the rest of the armor medium grey. A recessed line. The box has a rectangular recess at the back. Right The right Bicep piece is white and fixed to the suit without any visible means of attachment. The piece is rectangular and has the following features from top to bottom. A large recessed rectangular shape with dark red color. A raised white square at the upper left of the inside of the red colored rectangle. A raised medium grey box matching the same color as the rest of the armor medium grey. A recessed line. The box has a rectangular recess at the back running horizontally. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Gauntlet Left Gauntlet main body is white in color. The various boxes on all sides of rhe main body are medium grey in color that matches the medium grey color of the armor. The gauntlet is a clamshell-style without any visible closure methods and has a seam line present on each side. The gauntlet can be divided into 4 sections: top, inner, bottom and outer sides. The top side of the gauntlet has the following feature: **A white raised box with angled extremities and the following features. **On angled extremity, there is a trapezoidal shape with black color. **A small black square shape near the wrist side. **A square red shape toward the elbow extremity of the top box. **Two cylinders silver color with rounded extremities. **A rectangular grey box near the wrist. The outer side of the gauntlet has the following feature: A raised angled white box on which there are two medium grey shapes The inner/bottom sides are comprising: **A semi-circular shape on which multiple recessed trapezoidal shapes are present. **A red square shape. The grey boxes are visibly separate parts. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): The two red colored square shapes are illuminated. Gauntlet Right Gauntlet is white in color. various boxes on all sides are medium grey in color that matches the medium grey color of the armor. Gauntlet is a clamshell-style without any visible closure methods and has seam line present on each side. The gauntlet can be divided into 4 sections: top, inner, bottom and outer sides. The top of the gauntlet features three steps with the tallest at the beginning of the wearer’s elbow with the following features: **There is a red rectangle on the inner side the tallest step **A rounded Dart launcher sits in a rounded base atop of the tallest step. It is black and silver in color with a two-step cone with pointed tips. **The main cone has holes representing the chambers for individual darts. **On the the edge of the second step, is a silver whipcord launcher greeblie. **On the last step is a recessed display near the wearer’s wrist on which all buttons are medium grey color that matches the medium grey color of the armor. The outer side of the gauntlet has the following feature: **There is a large box on which 4 grey smaller boxes are attached. **At the tip of this box, two circular ports of flame throwers are present and are silver color. The inner and bottom sides are comprising: **A semi-circular shape on which multiple recessed trapezoidal shapes are present, and a red square shape. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The outer side large white box and its grey box are visibly separate parts. The whipcord launcher greeblie has a middle cylinder shape and dents on the top. OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): The two red colored shapes are red illuminated. Gloves and Hanplates Gloves are made of plain soft black leather or similar material and extend under the flightsuit. Logos, designs and any other non-canon details are not visible when worn. No visible stitches are present on the top of the gloves. Hand plates main body is white and is ridgid. it has 3 facets. three facets. Left and right are symetrical. A thick border is present all around the plate with a recessed rectangle in the middle section. Hand Plates are attached to the glove back. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Gloves are made of leather. Abdomen The abdomen section is grey and spans from the belt to the inside of the chest armor, concealing the wearers suit. There is a seam on the right side of the wearer that closes the two parts without a visible gap. A seam can also be present on the left side but without any visible gap. There is the appearance of 4 straps seamlessly attached to the armor. There is one raised shape at the back of the abdomen armor in between the 2 rear straps. There are multiple raised boxes and shapes present on the front side of the armor. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Only one seam is present on the right side of the wearer’s side The 4 straps are all identical in width and geometry There is the appearance of a clip on the straps approximately at the middle of the abdomen armor. OPTIONAL Level three certification (if applicable): The abdomen armor is made of flexible material. Cod *he cod plate is white and is made of a triangular shape that curves inward in the lower extremity. The main triangular section is completed by two small vertical sections curving inward on each side. The cod plate has no visible attachment method and attaches under the belt and abdominal armor. There is no attachment of the lower portion of the cod to the suit. There is a visible trapezoidal raised section on the top of main triangular section. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. Belt The belt proper is made of white coton like material and has the appearance of being made with thick material stitched with 5 horizontal lines creating 4 wider section in the middle and two narrow ones at bottom and top. The belt is attached to the abdomen armor with no visible mean of attachment, concealing the edge of the lower abdomen armor. The buckle of the belt is two visibaly separate parts white in color. The male portion of the buckle has a visible link to the female buckle that is trapezoidal with metal color. There are boxes on each side of the buckle attached to the belt strap. All boxes are white and are attached as per reference images. There are 7 identical rectangular boxes with a recess on the front vertical edges and a small chamfer on the top. 4 of these are attached to the wearer’s right and 3 on wearer’s left starting from the buckle. All are evenly spaced. There is a larger pouch on wearer’s left following the first 3 boxes. The pouch has the appearance of an overlapping rounded cover. The top cover has two horizontal chamfer on each side and the lower edges are chamfered vertically. There are two cylindrical boxes aligned with the abdominal rear straps on each side of the wearer’s back. The cylindrical boxes have an angled top and a fin protruding on the lower portion. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The push release button of the female buckle is visibly a separate component There is a rectangular recessed line on the metal portion of the male buckle The metal portion of the male buckle is followed by a black section entering the female buckle. Holster The holster is white and made from synthetic material. A rigid frame may be used under this to give it the proper shape around the pistol but must not be visible. Features two retention straps with a black snap button closure to secure the blaster pistol. The front loop attaches approximately under first box on the left side of the wearers. The back loop attaches approximately under the 4th boxes of the wearer’s left. The two loops joint together to form a singe v-shape above the holster. Thighs The thigh plates are white with a dark red insert and wrap around the wearer’s thigh with no visible mean of attachment. The left and right thigh plates are symmetrical. They have a top rectangular section that is aligned with wearer’s side. The thigh plates are curved to fit the leg shape and have rounded corners. There is recessed shape that creates a contour along the periphery and leaves a rectangular shape in the center. The red insert is trapezoidal. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The main section is asymmetric and is larger at the rear of the wearer’s thigh than at the front. The front top section is rectangular and the rear top section is at a downward angle. Knee Plates The knee plates are white and fitted over the wearer’s knee with no visible means of attachment. The left and right knee plates are symmetrical and comprise 4 sections (top, inner, outer, lower). There is a recessed trapezoidal shape in the lower section. There is a trapezoidal winglet attached on the outer section. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. Shins The shins are white and have the spat seamlessly attached to it. The left and right greaves are symmetrical. There is a flat face at the front and at the rear running from the spat all the way up to the top of the shins. If seams are present, they must be minimal and be located on the edge of front and rear flat portions. A raised lip is present around the top of the shin. A rectangular box is seamlessly attached to the outer top side of the shin. The top and bottom of the box are angled. A smaller box, aligned vertically with the top box is attached to the spat A rectangular box is attached at the rear of the spat and finishes at an angle on the shin. 3D printed armor can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a realistic finish. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The shin is a single piece construction with a seam only present at the rear which overlaps to the outside. The rear spat box has a recessed edge on the outside creating a smaller shape. The spat overlaps the boot with minimal gap. Boots The boots are above-ankle height, and made of white leather or leather-like material in the FOTK style. There is a vertical zipper on the inside that spans the height of the boot. There is a black flat sole with no heel. *No buckles or laces. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): There are 3 stitched lines that run across the instep. The instep is made of thick material with the 3 stiched lines creating raised sections. Standard FOTK boots are not acceptable. Optional Accessories Items below are optional costume accessories. These items are not required for approval, but if present appear as described below. If adding in an accessory after initial approval, the item still needs to be submitted to local GML for approval before use. Blaster Pistol Pistol blaster may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando pistol blaster Details to be painted black and metalic per reference photos. 3D printed blasters can not contain visible print lines and must be sanded smooth for a more realistic appearance. Blaster Rifle Rifle may be scratch-built, or a modified commercial toy Imperial Armored commando rifle blaster. Details to be painted black and metallic per reference photos. REVISION 2 OPEN FOR INPUT Quote
Nairy[Staff] Posted June 15 Report Posted June 15 @Sly11 Ok so I've done a pass now, and I have a few colors to help out with the feedback! Observations Misspellings Suggestions 1. Check usage of capital "S" and lowercase "s" in "Flight suit" 2. Four distinct sections, but only three dots - could be good to have four dots even if Left winglet/Right winglet can be combined 3. Check the wording of "jetpack" or "jet pack" and decide which one to use 4. Misspelled "Bacplate" and check wording of "backplate" or "back plate" and decide which one to use 5. Question: what is a "belt proper", "Coton" misspelled, "section" should be "sections", "visibaly" misspelled, two spaces in sentence, "chamfer" should be "chamfers" 6. "*he" misspelling 7. "Hanplates" misspelled, check the wording of "flightsuit" or "flight suit" and decide which one to use, check the wording of "hand plates" or "handplates", "three facets." text after a completed sentence should be removed, "symetrical" misspelled, "Hand Plates" with capital P, question: should "glove back." be "the back of the glove."? 1 Quote
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