Welcome to the Imperial Armored Commando research thread for CRL creation

[revlimiter[Staff]]

On 6/2/2024 at 2:09 AM, Sly11 said:

Please feel free to offer suggestions.

 

My beef as a GML is when the photos and text don't match. Drives me and my team nuts.

 

Do we have photos for the various costume components yet? If not I wouldn't mind helping in the photoshoppery. If we do have some, could they be posted? I'd love to proofread each section and match the text up with each armor piece.

[Sly11[Admin]]

All photos are already done and in the CRL, CRL is complete just refining stage now.

All parts are present left and right, considering there are some differences.

Frank wrote the text based off his images, I believe.

[Sly11[Admin]]

Example, but not to forget, we can have additional images and close-ups in the gallery as part of the CRL.

 

 

 

[Sithtrooper02[TK]]

13 hours ago, Sly11 said:

All photos are already done and in the CRL, CRL is complete just refining stage now.

All parts are present left and right, considering there are some differences.

Frank wrote the text based off his images, I believe.

I confirm,

 

i wrote the text based of course on the reference pictures, but I checked that all costume parts pictures I took are matching exactly the text I submitted.

I could easily provide additional pictures if needed for clarity.

 

Edited June 16 by Sithtrooper02

[Sly11[Admin]]

On 6/15/2024 at 7:20 PM, Nairy said:

@Sly11 Ok so I've done a pass now, and I have a few colors to help out with the feedback!

• Observations
• Misspellings
• Suggestions

 

1. Check usage of capital "S" and lowercase "s" in "Flight suit"

 

2. Four distinct sections, but only three dots - could be good to have four dots even if Left winglet/Right winglet can be combined

 

3. Check the wording of "jetpack" or "jet pack" and decide which one to use

 

4. Misspelled "Bacplate" and check wording of "backplate" or "back plate" and decide which one to use

 

5. Question: what is a "belt proper", "Coton" misspelled, "section" should be "sections", "visibaly" misspelled, two spaces in sentence, "chamfer" should be "chamfers"

 

6. "*he" misspelling

 

7. "Hanplates" misspelled, check the wording of "flightsuit" or "flight suit" and decide which one to use, check the wording of "hand plates" or "handplates", "three facets." text after a completed sentence should be removed, "symetrical" misspelled, "Hand Plates" with capital P, question: should "glove back." be "the back of the glove."?

These corrections have now been made.

Some were already corrected when I was constructing the Wiki template, others now done.

Thanks for you input 

S

[Sly11[Admin]]

 Will be sending this off to the LMO team for further input and the suggestion that the new statements Chris is working on can be added at the top of the CRL regarding materials and 3D printed armor.

I would much prefer it stated once, than in every single section of the CRL for each armor piece.

[Sly11[Admin]]

UPDATE:

CRL is in the hands of the LMO team and i am waiting on any final feedback for adjustments.

 

Stay tuned as this should be green lit in the very near future.

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Looking over the CRL I noticed these weren't added

 

I'm not sure if it has been mentioned, came up in one of the build groups, sewn lines on the long sleeves are only on the outside. 

FLIGHT SUIT

OPTIONAL L2

Long sleeves do not have horizontal quilted ribs on the inside of the arm between the short sleeves and the gauntlets 

 

 

 

 

 

Blaster

OPTIONAL L2

Handle should have a molded/curved appearance (same as SE-14R)

 

 

[Sly11[Admin]]

Blaster pistol will get changed once we have an accurate model and image for the CRL, for the mean time there won't be a lvl 2 for them.

The lights are also being removed from the blasters, as I don't believe they have those. This was an oversight from the original CRL draft.

 

Sleeves are fixed

[Chemi[Staff]]

This was not added either (boots):

 

 

OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable):

 

There are 3 stitched lines that run across the instep.

The instep is made of thick material with the 3 stiched lines creating raised sections.

Standard FOTK boots are not acceptable.

 

 

[Sly11[Admin]]

9 hours ago, Chemi said:

This was not added either (boots):

 

 

OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable):

 

There are 3 stitched lines that run across the instep.

The instep is made of thick material with the 3 stiched lines creating raised sections.

Standard FOTK boots are not acceptable.

 

 

Easy, I shall get it updated tonight.

[Sithtrooper02[TK]]

On the Chest plate, the red light is missing, from the draft :

 

OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable):

• The red light is functional under the ranking box

[Sly11[Admin]]

Red light is added but under Lvl 3 as all lights are.

Keeping this the same as with blasters for continuity across CRL's