Teach-, Requesting Pre Approval Review, (850 Armor Works)

[Teach-]

Bob Jozokos 

New England Garrison 

Granite Squad (in the future)

850 Armor Works 

Black Series helmet (still under construction) 

DarmansProps neck seal 

Keep Trooping gloves 

Keep Trooping boots 

5’10”, 162 lbs 

Rogue One TK 

Help and encouragement from gmrhodes13, TerribleBen, Twelveravens, FN1313, Sly11, revlimiter, and DarthSaiyan8697 

 

While I work on the Black Series helmet, I’m looking for feedback on the body. My build is here: Bob's ROTK 850 Armor Works Build Thread.

 

Pictures below. Feedback welcome!

 

 

 

 

 

 

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Great to see you at this point, nice work, almost there.

 

I do have a couple of areas you may want to address:

First thing your images are a little bit small so hard to zoom in on details, make sure you try a bigger resolution/size when sending to your GML

Chest / back plates appear to be sitting quite high, note the step down to shoulders

Gap between forearm and bicep, you may be able to adjust playing with the strapping biceps down a little, forearms up a little, it may just be your height and arm length, don't stress too much about his area

Shin sniper plate appears to be leaning forward, may just be the photo

 

 

Sniper plates do look a little odd on the ROTK

 

You may want to adjust the rear top ridges, trim the angled ends, compare with the reference below they are straight.

 

Just comparing the sides between ab and kidney, looks like your right black area is curved top and bottom, the left is straight.

Small gap between TD plate and back

Belt open on left

 

I think that's about it but I'm no ROTK expert, hopefully more will chime in.

 

[Teach-]

Working on these adjustments. Thank you gmrhodes13!