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[Tx51391[TK]]

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Edited January 28 by Tx51391

[fishgoh0nk[TK]]

I would take a revisit on the ear paint, the perimeter stripe and the stripe in the middle could use a redo. 

 

 

 

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Looks like you have a few more issues with your helmet.

 

Top trap decal not positioned correctly, too high and side gap, also cheek trap a little off angle

 

Rear trap decal lifting and looks to have a large air bubble, or it may be the photo

 

Brow trim should be cut straight  or a slight angle 

  

 

Fall of tube stripes should be from top forward (a bit hard to see in your images), also a pencil width from cheeks, brow trim appears to be dipping in the center. Rim of mic tips should be white

 

 

 

Also vocoder sides could match

 

Paint should not be on gums Frown is painted gray and does not leave the teeth area.

 

Ear paint reference 

 

Bottom ear screw doesn't look correct, not sure if it's painted either, hard to make out in image

 

 

Thigh ammo strip too long

 

 

Belt overhang could be trimmed. Shoulder straps are a little long, could trim off large tab. Back plate overlapping kidney

 

Detonator too long

 

Thigh cover strips should be straight, no gap in center of lower ridge also

 

 

 

Holster mounted too far back

 

 

Drop box elastic a little too long.

 

 

Add some foam behind sniper knee plate to hold it away from thigh, at the moment it appears under the thigh

 

Large ab plate looks to be on an angle

 

 

 

Brow trim height is normally a little higher, the low brow is more a Hero look

 

Shoulder bells could be brought in more towards the shoulder straps

 

Looks like you have writing on the back of your undersuit which will have to be covered/removed or blackened

 

Photos are a little grainy, there may be other items bit a little hard to make out, I'm viewing on phone as computer is having a meltdown, make sure you take high resolution images in a well lit area.

 

A bit of a list but nothing too hard to rectify, good luck

 

[Tx51391[TK]]

Appreciate the feedback thank you, I'll get on those changes asap

[justjoseph63[Staff]]

12 hours ago, Tx51391 said:

Appreciate the feedback thank you, I'll get on those changes asap

 

As noted, you have a few issues there, Jay.  But also know that we are here to help every step of the way, so never be shy about asking for advice on how to deal with any (or all) of them.  We are at yours service, sir.