MightyAtom[TK] Posted November 25, 2020 Report Posted November 25, 2020 (edited) Name: Mark Gambino Username: MightyAtom Knightfall Garrison Melbourne, Australia https://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=33163 Armour: AP Helmet: AP Blaster: Premier Props (Etsy) Height: 6' Weight: 178lbs Boots: Imperial Boots Canvas Belt: Imperial Issue (Kittle) Hand Plates: [mention=22112]justjoseph63[/mention] Electronics: [mention=35426]MissionTrooper[/mention]Arduino Nano Neck seal: Darman's Props Holster: AP Edited December 4, 2020 by MightyAtom Adding thigh ammo pack rivet interior photos 3 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted November 25, 2020 Report Posted November 25, 2020 Looking great Mark, thank you for your EIB app, one of us will be with you shortly. Added to the processing line. 1 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted November 25, 2020 Report Posted November 25, 2020 Nice work trooper, a great build overall, a couple of suggestions before the DO's get here: Your shoulder straps on the back are not quite centered to the backplate, also there is white excess elastic showing Noticed your cocking lever is silver, these are normally black star- Could you also post thigh ammo strip inside connectors, I know the DO's like to see that Good luck with approval although I doubt you will need it. 2 Quote
MightyAtom[TK] Posted November 26, 2020 Author Report Posted November 26, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, gmrhodes13 said: Nice work trooper, a great build overall, a couple of suggestions before the DO's get here: Your shoulder straps on the back are not quite centered to the backplate, also there is white excess elastic showing Noticed your cocking lever is silver, these are normally blackstar- Could you also post thigh ammo strip inside connectors, I know the DO's like to see that Good luck with approval although I doubt you will need it. Nice catches there! Those pesky elastics. And what a great pic ref of the E-11. Thank you. I'll add pics now. Sent from my Imperial Comlink Edited November 26, 2020 by MightyAtom 1 Quote
MaskedVengeance[Staff] Posted November 26, 2020 Report Posted November 26, 2020 Great work on your build, and EXCELLENT photos!Sent via Imperial Tapatalk Comms 1 Quote
magni[TK] Posted November 26, 2020 Report Posted November 26, 2020 Looking good Trooper! Best of Luck! 1 Quote
tarok[TK] Posted November 26, 2020 Report Posted November 26, 2020 *Knightfall Garrison. Missing the “K”. Good luck with your application. I’m sure it’ll be an easy pass. 1 Quote
MightyAtom[TK] Posted November 26, 2020 Author Report Posted November 26, 2020 *Knightfall Garrison. Missing the “K”. Good luck with your application. I’m sure it’ll be an easy pass.*raises fist to air* Autocorrect!!!Thanks mate!Sent from my Imperial Comlink 1 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted November 27, 2020 Report Posted November 27, 2020 Very nice work Mark, best of luck sir. 1 Quote
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted December 2, 2020 Report Posted December 2, 2020 Wow, Mark... just WOW! Awesome job on this build, sir, and great attention to detail (I see you have really done your research)! Mario will be with ya' soon, so hang in there. 1 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted December 4, 2020 Report Posted December 4, 2020 Hi Mark, almost ready with your review. Could you please add a close photo of your boots? Sides and front. Thanks. Quote
MightyAtom[TK] Posted December 4, 2020 Author Report Posted December 4, 2020 54 minutes ago, TKSpartan said: Hi Mark, almost ready with your review. Could you please add a close photo of your boots? Sides and front. Thanks. Hey Mario, Great, thanks! I've added two photos of my boots to the above. The white balance seems a little off though, I assure you they are white as white! Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted December 4, 2020 Report Posted December 4, 2020 Hi Mark, and thank you for your EIB application! CRL and EIB Application Requirements: All required photos have been submitted, and on behalf of the entire D.O. staff we are pleased to welcome you to the rank of Expert Infantry. Congratulations! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly; In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armour. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions. *************************************************** I followed your Building Thread till your pre approval submission and let me say you did an awesome work with your build . Let's start with the Helmet. We are suggesting to clean up a bit your vocoder to reflect the more accuracy the the screen used helmet. This is an easy fix ! Reference Images *************************************************** Centurion Requirements; In this section we prepare you for Centurion. Because Centurion photos show more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here and additional photos may be required. We try to point out all that we can from what we see, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. This could be just a dressing issue or a hot bath need, but your left shoulder bridge seems is not quite centered to the backplate, also there is a little "curl" of elastic showing, just something to consider every time you suit up. . Reference Images CRL L3: Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor. Abdominal and Kidney Plate align horizontally at top Looking closely to your ab to kidney connection, we noticed that the kidney plate protrudes a bit from the ab plate and causes a noticeable gap on the left side, this could be just a simple strapping adjustment. Reference Images CRl L3: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels. It would be necessary to raise your AB belt a bit to achieve the L3 requirement , in your case it seems that you already have a Velcro piece on the abdominal plate so it is easy to adjust. Reference Images Finally , your E11 Blaster. Your your cocking lever is silver color and these are normally black , a little silver (weathering) is ok, as you can see in the reference images. Just a simple detail and easy to fix in a quick painting session. Reference Images Congratulations again and looking forward for your Centurion submission soon. Well done Trooper !!! *************************************************** 2 Quote
ukswrath[Staff] Posted December 4, 2020 Report Posted December 4, 2020 Congratulations Mark welcome to EI brother Few adjustment and you'll be ready for Centurion, hope to see you there. 1 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted December 4, 2020 Report Posted December 4, 2020 Congratulations trooper and welcome to the EI ranks, a well build kit, nicely done 1 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted December 4, 2020 Report Posted December 4, 2020 Congratulations Mark and welcome to Expert Infantry 1 Quote
MightyAtom[TK] Posted December 4, 2020 Author Report Posted December 4, 2020 (edited) 9 hours ago, TKSpartan said: Hi Mark, and thank you for your EIB application! CRL and EIB Application Requirements: All required photos have been submitted, and on behalf of the entire D.O. staff we are pleased to welcome you to the rank of Expert Infantry. Congratulations! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly; In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armour. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions. *************************************************** I followed your Building Thread till your pre approval submission and let me say you did an awesome work with your build . Let's start with the Helmet. We are suggesting to clean up a bit your vocoder to reflect the more accuracy the the screen used helmet. This is an easy fix ! Reference Images *************************************************** Centurion Requirements; In this section we prepare you for Centurion. Because Centurion photos show more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here and additional photos may be required. We try to point out all that we can from what we see, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. This could be just a dressing issue or a hot bath need, but your left shoulder bridge seems is not quite centered to the backplate, also there is a little "curl" of elastic showing, just something to consider every time you suit up. . Reference Images CRL L3: Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor. Abdominal and Kidney Plate align horizontally at top Looking closely to your ab to kidney connection, we noticed that the kidney plate protrudes a bit from the ab plate and causes a noticeable gap on the left side, this could be just a simple strapping adjustment. Reference Images CRl L3: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels. It would be necessary to raise your AB belt a bit to achieve the L3 requirement , in your case it seems that you already have a Velcro piece on the abdominal plate so it is easy to adjust. Reference Images Finally , your E11 Blaster. Your your cocking lever is silver color and these are normally black , a little silver (weathering) is ok, as you can see in the reference images. Just a simple detail and easy to fix in a quick painting session. Reference Images Congratulations again and looking forward for your Centurion submission soon. Well done Trooper !!! *************************************************** Thank you! This is amazing! With all the advice I received and the other excellent builds out there that I poured over, it feels like a real team effort. Thanks to everyone who helped me! I've made notes of your suggestions for a Centurion submission and will get onto fixes this weekend. Thanks again! Sent from my Imperial Comlink Edited December 4, 2020 by MightyAtom Quote
giskard8[Staff] Posted December 13, 2020 Report Posted December 13, 2020 Congratulations Mark, Welcome to the rank of EI. 1 Quote
MissionTrooper[TK] Posted December 30, 2020 Report Posted December 30, 2020 Congratulations Trooper! You look, and sound ;), great! 1 Quote
CableGuy[Admin] Posted December 30, 2020 Report Posted December 30, 2020 Well done, Mark. Great job. :-) 1 Quote
TK88667[TK] Posted January 6, 2021 Report Posted January 6, 2021 Congrats Mark well done!!Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk 1 Quote
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