Yacorp Requesting Pre Approval Review (RWA)

[Yacorp[TK]]

I think i'm ready for a full check-up and can start thinking about a TK-ID :-)

 

INFORMATION:

1.  First/last name  Jakob Mühlbauer

2.  Future Garrison/Squad/Outpost or local area German Garrison, Custodes Euroi Squad

3.  Armor maker RWA

4.  Helmet maker RWA

5.  Cloth belt maker RWA

6.  Neck seal maker RWA

7.  Boot maker Imperial Boots

8.  Height  175 cm

9.  weight 70 kg

10.  TK type ANH Stunt

11.  Name(s) of any Trooper(s) who significantly helped with your build Cableguy, gmrhodes13, TKSpartan, thank you for your guidance on the FISD, always supporting me with my build thread!

 

 

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Hi there nice work, just a couple of things for tweaking.

Your thighs are at a slightly different height as well as you have quite a gap between the tops of them and the cod, you could bring them upwards a little.

Large gap at your wrists and elbows very narrow gap, you could drop the forearms a little to give you more gaps at your elbows for movement.

Appears your butt plate may be overlapping the kidney on the side image, strapping may need to be adjusted

A little hard to give much feedback as the images are a little on the small side and slightly blurry when enlarged, your GML (garrison membership liaison) would appreciate  slightly larger clearer images and don't forget you'll need to send in an action shot too  

 

Good luck with approval

[CableGuy[TK]]

Hey Jakob,

Great job!

I think Glen has you covered. My thoughts were also;
- Thighs at slightly different heights (just adjust strapping)
- butt plate overlapping kidney (again, strapping adjustment will likely fix this).

Best of with your approval. I’m sure you’ll do well. :-)

[Yacorp[TK]]

Thanks for the hints. I've brought the forearms down a bit, and the right thigh up a little, and now I'll see how approval goes.

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Good luck, hope you hear something very soon