Welshtudor75[TK] Posted September 1, 2020 Report Posted September 1, 2020 Tudor Davies Tk91175 Welshtudor75 Ireland Garrison Armor - DA props Helmet - DA props E11 - Doopydoos https://i.imgur.com/nfQ0i3h.jpg http://imgur.com/gallery/G5ZEZxu Additional images requested Frown fix up as requested Quote
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted September 1, 2020 Report Posted September 1, 2020 Hi Tudor, and thanks for your submission! Before we can move you forward, you will need to use imgur *** (or a similar photo sharing site) to add the individual photos to your post. We aslo need the following required info: Armor maker Helmet maker Blaster maker ***This tutorial may help: https://www.whitearmor.net/forum/topic/48799-posting-photos-using-imgur-101/ Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted September 1, 2020 Report Posted September 1, 2020 Nice work, a few things you may want to address before the DO's comment, once you get your images sorted you will also need a few other photos. Close ups of the following. Front and both sides of your sniper plate. Inside rivets thigh ammo strip (outside rivets also need painting white) Ab/kidney side rivets (which will also need painting white) Blaster D ring Some adjustments. You have a big gap from hand plates to forearms, you may want to bring your forearms down a little. Belt needs to come up closer to bottom plate button, also needs to contour the ab as it is sticking out on the sides. You have some quite large snaps / rivets on your holster straps, may need changing, check some other EI applications. Belt is very cream in colour, may need addressing but see what DO's say. Hand plates are also cream compared to armor color. Thighs appear to be jamming under your cod and butt plate, may need to bring them down a little or trim. Detonator could come down further on the belt as it's sitting on top of the belt. Normally the TD panel does not have rounded corners. Thighs are very large around the knees and not central with shins, may need some foam to centralise or even trim. These are just suggestions to save time with your application. Good luck with approval Quote
shashachu[TK] Posted September 3, 2020 Report Posted September 3, 2020 Hi Tudor! Could you please embed the photos directly into your application post? It makes the reviews easier on us, and it's nice for other troopers to use as a reference. It looks like maybe the link to the gallery has gone away, but if I recall from when I looked quickly through them, I believe your ammo pack rivet needs to be painted white. Thigh ammo belt is attached to thigh with a solid head rivet, painted white, in the upper corner and fastened to the lower thigh ridge. I could also be remembering wrong, but I think your ab/kidney rivets were also missing the white paint. Although the rivets are technically an L3 requirement, if you already have the white paint out to paint over your ammo pack rivet, you may as well tackle those ones as well. Quote
shashachu[TK] Posted September 6, 2020 Report Posted September 6, 2020 Hi @Welshtudor75 just wanted to be sure you saw my comment - we'll need you to embed all the photos inside of the post. Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted September 9, 2020 Report Posted September 9, 2020 I have added the images for the application. Some other images will still be needed: Close up of his Ab/kidney rivets Sniper plate front and both sides Thigh ammo strip rivets, both sides and insides (also paint white) Clearer left side helmet photo Blaster D ring Detonator front panel Right side ab plate "Han" snap Outside butt plate snaps 2 Quote
ukswrath[Staff] Posted September 11, 2020 Report Posted September 11, 2020 Great work Tudor, good luck with your application Quote
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted September 12, 2020 Report Posted September 12, 2020 Hi Tudor, and thanks for the additional photos! One of us will be with you shortly, sir, so hang in there. Quote
Welshtudor75[TK] Posted September 12, 2020 Author Report Posted September 12, 2020 54 minutes ago, justjoseph63 said: Hi Tudor, and thanks for the additional photos! One of us will be with you shortly, sir, so hang in there. Thank you joe Quote
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted September 27, 2020 Report Posted September 27, 2020 Hi Tudor, and thank you for your application for Expert Infantry! (My apologies for the delay)! CRL and EIB Application Requirements All required photos are now in and, after review, we are pleased to welcome you to EI! On behalf of the entire DO staff, congratulations!! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions. As seen in the reference images below, your brow trim is sitting a bit low, so we are suggesting that you raise it a few mm to better match the Stunt buckets seen in ANH. Reference images The right side is spot-on, but the brow trim on the left could use a snip to shorten it. Ideally it should be cut off right at or in front of the rear trap line above it. Reference images GREAT to see that you hand painted the traps, but ideally they should fill in the indented area more. Reference images You have the ear screws painted, but unfortunately the color does not match the same shade of white as your ears, causing them to stand out quite a bit. Reference images We rarely have access to a mirror before suiting up, but you can ask a fellow TK to ensure that your gaps are parallel. Reference images Your forearm openings are sitting a little far from the hand guards. Lowering both the biceps and forearms would close up that gap nicely! It also seems that your ABS belt is sticking out pretty wide on the sides and could use a hot-water bath to bend the ends in so that they wrap around your waist instead of flaring out. Reference images Both your thighs are sitting high, and in a perfect world should not ride under the cod area. Trimming them down would also make it more comfortable when you walk. Reference images The same in the rear. The tops of the cover strips need to be trimmed, as they should not extend past the top of the thigh. Easy fix! Reference images The alignment of the cover strips on your left side could not be better, but for symmetry the right thigh and calf should be rotated in a bit to match. Reference images We are asking that you trim down the small ab-button plate and square off the corners. NICE paint job on those, by the way! Reference images The thigh ammo pack should be equally spaced from the "corners" of the thigh on each side. Reference images Centurion Requirements In this section we prepare you for Centurion. More photos may be requested in the future that allow us to make better decisions on possible adjustments. If there are any areas of concern they will be discussed here. Because Centurion photos show much more detail than EIB, items to pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here. We try to point out all that we can from what is seen, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. The tube stripes on the right side of your bucket are pretty close, but the left side is not the same distance away from the cheek and should be closer. Reference images Unfortunately you over trimmed the sides of your large ab-button plate. It must have a flat area surrounding it so will need to be replaced for Level 3. Reference images Brilliant job on your shims, sir, but as per the CRL no seam can be present (seen). An easy fix here for a better screen accurate look... Your ABS belt needs to be raised a bit. Some troopers use Velcro with great success. Reference images While the bottom is perfect, as per the CRL "The corners of the plastic ammo belt shall be trimmed at a 45 degree angle that meets the outer edge of the cloth belt" Reference images And that's it, sir. You have a bit of work in front of you, but we are all sure that you can rise to the challenge. Looking forward to seeing your submission for Centurion as soon as you are done!!! Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted September 27, 2020 Report Posted September 27, 2020 Congratulations trooper and welcome to the EI ranks Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted September 28, 2020 Report Posted September 28, 2020 Congratulations Tudor, welcome to the rank. Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted September 28, 2020 Report Posted September 28, 2020 Congratulations Trooper !!! Welcome to EIB Quote
Welshtudor75[TK] Posted September 28, 2020 Author Report Posted September 28, 2020 Agh thanks troopers , I'm glad I made it , really appreciate all your help through submission, congrats on the awesome 1000 achievement ! Your all doing a fine job and are a credit to the empire ! Quote
giskard8[Staff] Posted October 12, 2020 Report Posted October 12, 2020 Congratulations trooper, welcome to the ranks. Quote
ukswrath[Staff] Posted October 19, 2020 Report Posted October 19, 2020 Congratulations Tudor, welcome to EIB Quote
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