Swarzo Requesting Pre Approval Review (ATA)

[Swarzo]

1. Cory Szaro

2. New England Garrison

3. ATA Works

4. ATA

5. Home made

6. Home made

7. Imperial Boots

8. DoopyDoos Hasbro conversion

13. ANH Stunt

 

Hello!

I realize my belt is all messed up in these pictures. Next time I need to be more specific to my photographer about what needs to be fixed!

 

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[CableGuy[TK]]

Hey Cory,

Overall, that looks pretty good. Seems well fitted to you mr frame.

Just a couple of key things I’d look at, if it were me.


Shoulder bells;

Ideally, these would sit much closer to the chest plate.



Helmet details;

If you can, I’d try to tidy the painted black lines (traps and tears) and the tubestripes a little. Ear alignment on this side might also be questioned at the higher levels, but not likely at basic. :-)





Ab buttons;

Ideally, the painted buttons would be a little smaller.
The outside of the plates could be trimmed down a little.



Calves;

The coverstrips on the calves should not pass beyond the ridge.




I’d imagine you’re not far from basic, and with a few tweaks, could likely progress to EIB and Centurion. :-)

Best wishes,

Dan

[TKSpartan[Staff]]

Nice work Cory, as Dan pointed, just a few tweaks and you're ready.  Good luck  

[Swarzo]

Thanks, guys! I'll be able to take care of the cover strips easily enough. The painting on the helmet is the hard bit for me. Seems I'm not good at making clean lines. I'll get it done right eventually!

[CableGuy[TK]]

36 minutes ago, Swarzo said:

Thanks, guys! I'll be able to take care of the cover strips easily enough. The painting on the helmet is the hard bit for me. Seems I'm not good at making clean lines. I'll get it done right eventually!

No worries, brother. What you have is a greaet start and I'm sure you'll be joining the ranks VERY soon!

[Swarzo]

I've already taken care of the cover strips on my calves. Spent some time fixing up my previous paint job on my helmet as well. I think it is a big improvement over what I had before!

 

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[CableGuy[TK]]

Great job on the helmet painting, Cory. An excellent improvement, especially those black stripes in the tears.

Great stuff, trooper. :-)

[ABS80]

the problem is the ATA  ab buttons  are way too big and too close togheter so you need to cheat quite a bit on the paint to make they look smaller

Edited April 8, 2020 by ABS80