Tivy[TK] Posted October 17, 2019 Report Posted October 17, 2019 (edited) TK -16790 requesting ESB Centurion status [AP] [AFP] Trooper Info : Name: José Luís Delgado FISD Forum Name: Tivy Legion ID: TK-16790 Garrison: Spanish Garrison Legion Profile: https://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=30566 Height: 171cm Weight: 74 kg EIB Approval Link : Costume Information : Armor : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Helmet : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Neck Seal : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Belt : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Boots : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Hand Guards : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Holster :AFP (Armour Factory Props) Blaster : AFP (Armour Factory Props) Alterations made since EIB granted : Helmet Right/Left: Black line paint on the bulges of the ears Sanding the inside edge of the wrists to eliminate the return Reduced tooth gaps Full Body Front: Back Left Right Right side details Left side details Hello! Armor details: Front Ab button plates Back / kidney connection Interior strapping Left Right Cod and butt plate attachment Forearms details Hand Plates Thigh pack atachment Sniper Plate Helmet: Front New Photos!!! (Fill the tooth gaps) Right Left Back Hovi Mics detail Lens Color S-Trim Accessories Detail: Thermal Detonator New Photos!!!! (trimmed metal strips) Drop box Front/back Blaster E-11: D-ring detail Neck Seal Holster Boots Edited October 20, 2019 by Tivy Quote
Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK] Posted October 17, 2019 Report Posted October 17, 2019 Good luck Pucelano. Looking good my dear friend. 1 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted October 17, 2019 Report Posted October 17, 2019 Se ve muy bien Jose Luis !! Buena Suerte con tu aprobación !! Saludos Looking Good Trooper !! Good Luck with your approval !! 1 Quote
ToniML[TK] Posted October 17, 2019 Report Posted October 17, 2019 Good work Tivy!!!Enviado desde mi Redmi Note 4 mediante Tapatalk 1 Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 17, 2019 Author Report Posted October 17, 2019 8 hours ago, Lionel Noronha Gallardo said: Good luck Pucelano. Looking good my dear friend. thank you very much friend!! I hope we see each other soon!! Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 17, 2019 Author Report Posted October 17, 2019 7 hours ago, TKSpartan said: Se ve muy bien Jose Luis !! Buena Suerte con tu aprobación !! Saludos Looking Good Trooper !! Good Luck with your approval !! Thank you very much, I hope to be lucky! 1 Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 17, 2019 Author Report Posted October 17, 2019 47 minutes ago, ToniML said: Good work Tivy!!! Enviado desde mi Redmi Note 4 mediante Tapatalk thank you! Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted October 17, 2019 Report Posted October 17, 2019 Nice work trooper: You could drop your TD a bit so it's central to the belt You may also want to apply a little heat to your right calf as it appears open a little. Just check the dimensions of your TD appears a little narrow between cover plate and caps You have quite a bit of extra area moved from the teeth at the top in the middle, perhaps some abs paste behind will help reduce this You may also want to bring your brow trim up a little, hero versions had the lower brow look. A few teaks and you'll look great. Good luck with approval Quote
shashachu[TK] Posted October 21, 2019 Report Posted October 21, 2019 Hola José! I love how happy you look in your photos. *Great* job with fixing the teeth on your helmet. A couple small issues before we continue with your Centurion application. First, the L3 CRL states: There should be a minimal gap between the shoulder armor and the chest/back plates. Your shoulder bell gap in the EIB application photos actually looks a lot smaller so it might just be the way you are holding your arms, but the rear photo is showing a pretty big gap: Can you post new photos from the front and back showing minimal shoulder bell gap? Reference Images: . Next, your belt is still a little low. The L3 CRL states: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels. If you look at the reference photos, you'll see that the top of the plastic belt should be touching or even slightly overlapping the bottom ab button. . On my own kit, I added a little velcro to my belt to keep it from sagging. You're almost there! Just a couple small fixes. Let me know if you have any questions. 1 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted October 21, 2019 Report Posted October 21, 2019 Too easy for you Jose Luis !! Go there! Fácil para ti José Luis !!! Vamos !! Quote
TxuTxi[TK] Posted October 22, 2019 Report Posted October 22, 2019 (edited) On 10/21/2019 at 8:42 AM, shashachu said: Hola José! I love how happy you look in your photos. *Great* job with fixing the teeth on your helmet. A couple small issues before we continue with your Centurion application. First, the L3 CRL states: There should be a minimal gap between the shoulder armor and the chest/back plates. Your shoulder bell gap in the EIB application photos actually looks a lot smaller so it might just be the way you are holding your arms, but the rear photo is showing a pretty big gap: Can you post new photos from the front and back showing minimal shoulder bell gap? Reference Images: . Next, your belt is still a little low. The L3 CRL states: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels. If you look at the reference photos, you'll see that the top of the plastic belt should be touching or even slightly overlapping the bottom ab button. . On my own kit, I added a little velcro to my belt to keep it from sagging. You're almost there! Just a couple small fixes. Let me know if you have any questions. C´mon Jose!!!! Centurion is your!!!! Edited October 22, 2019 by TxuTxi Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 22, 2019 Author Report Posted October 22, 2019 On 10/21/2019 at 8:42 AM, shashachu said: Hola José! I love how happy you look in your photos. *Great* job with fixing the teeth on your helmet. A couple small issues before we continue with your Centurion application. First, the L3 CRL states: There should be a minimal gap between the shoulder armor and the chest/back plates. Your shoulder bell gap in the EIB application photos actually looks a lot smaller so it might just be the way you are holding your arms, but the rear photo is showing a pretty big gap: Can you post new photos from the front and back showing minimal shoulder bell gap? Reference Images: . Next, your belt is still a little low. The L3 CRL states: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels. If you look at the reference photos, you'll see that the top of the plastic belt should be touching or even slightly overlapping the bottom ab button. . On my own kit, I added a little velcro to my belt to keep it from sagging. You're almost there! Just a couple small fixes. Let me know if you have any questions. Hi ShaSha!!! I leave here the photos you request. I hope you like them 2 Quote
shashachu[TK] Posted October 23, 2019 Report Posted October 23, 2019 Hello José! I'm very sorry for not seeing this earlier, but we'll need you to make one more correction for Centurion. Your 'Han' snap needs to be moved closer to the corner of your ab. We don't require a precise measurement, but this is an area where we'd like troopers to more closely match the reference photos, and yours is too far in. You'll need to drill out the snap, move it, and fill the old hole with ABS paste. Reference Image: You're almost there, my friend, and I have total confidence in you. Please let us know if you need anything from us. Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 23, 2019 Author Report Posted October 23, 2019 3 hours ago, shashachu said: Hello José! I'm very sorry for not seeing this earlier, but we'll need you to make one more correction for Centurion. Your 'Han' snap needs to be moved closer to the corner of your ab. We don't require a precise measurement, but this is an area where we'd like troopers to more closely match the reference photos, and yours is too far in. You'll need to drill out the snap, move it, and fill the old hole with ABS paste. Reference Image: You're almost there, my friend, and I have total confidence in you. Please let us know if you need anything from us. Thank you very much for the speed, I will start working on it. Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 25, 2019 Author Report Posted October 25, 2019 On 10/23/2019 at 9:25 PM, Tivy said: Thank you very much for the speed, I will start working on it. Hi Sha Sha! I have it! 1 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted October 25, 2019 Report Posted October 25, 2019 yes José Luis, Your Badge is waiting for you Sir. Excelente José Luis, ese logro es tuyo !! 2 Quote
shashachu[TK] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Hi José, Thanks for your application and the quick turnaround on the corrections. CRL and Centurion Application Requirements All required photos are now in and, after review, we are pleased to welcome you to Centurion! On behalf of the DO team and myself, many congratulations! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly In this area we discuss areas that could benefit from additional improvement. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions One suggestion here with your helmet. Usually Stunt helmets had their brows slightly higher than you have yours. It's personal preference, but if you're looking for ultimate screen accuracy, you should consider raising your brow just a few millimeters. Reference Images: Finally, your cod rivet is a little far in. This isn't a visible area so it's not a blocker, but something to consider. Reference Image: And that's it, my friend! Congratulations again on a beautiful build. Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Congratulations trooper 1 Quote
Sly11[Admin] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Congratulations Jose and welcome to Centurion rank. 1 Quote
giskard8[Staff] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Congratulations trooper, Welcome to the ranks. 1 Quote
acetilacetato[TK] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Congrats Jose, good job!!!Enviado desde mi SM-N950F mediante Tapatalk 1 Quote
ukswrath[Staff] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Excellent! Congratulations and welcome to Centurion Jose 1 Quote
Tivy[TK] Posted October 29, 2019 Author Report Posted October 29, 2019 7 hours ago, shashachu said: Hi José, Thanks for your application and the quick turnaround on the corrections. CRL and Centurion Application Requirements All required photos are now in and, after review, we are pleased to welcome you to Centurion! On behalf of the DO team and myself, many congratulations! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly In this area we discuss areas that could benefit from additional improvement. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions One suggestion here with your helmet. Usually Stunt helmets had their brows slightly higher than you have yours. It's personal preference, but if you're looking for ultimate screen accuracy, you should consider raising your brow just a few millimeters. Reference Images: Finally, your cod rivet is a little far in. This isn't a visible area so it's not a blocker, but something to consider. Reference Image: And that's it, my friend! Congratulations again on a beautiful build. Thank you very much I am very happy to have achieved the rank, I will show it with pride 1 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Congratualtions Trooper !! You did it great!! Welcome to Centurion . Felicitaciones Trooper!! gran trabajo, Bienvenido a Centurion !! 1 Quote
Anxo200[TK] Posted October 29, 2019 Report Posted October 29, 2019 Bravissimo Jose, excelent work 1 Quote
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