Denis09[TK] Posted October 14, 2019 Report Posted October 14, 2019 Name Denis Wolmerath 501st TK ID 16003 FISD forum name Denis09 Garrison German Garrison Costume Information Mandatory Information Armor = Troopermaster Helmet= Troopermaster Blaster= Purchased on Ebay and modified itself Optional Height = 182 cm Weight = 104 kg Boots = H&R Leather Boots-Painted himself Canvas belt = Troopermaster Hand Plates = Troopermaster Holster = from a member of German Garrison Quote
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted October 15, 2019 Report Posted October 15, 2019 Hi Denis, and thank you for your application for Centurion! Before we "Move along" there are a couple of simple items that need to be addressed, and looking at your build, I am sure you can get these done in no time! The first one concerns your wrist openings. As per the CRL it states that: "No return edge on the inside of the front of the forearm is allowed". 30 seconds with a Dremel type tool will get rid of the return edge on the "hump". Easy stuff! Reference images It looks as if your right (and left) shoulder bells are still not quite as close as they could be to the shoulder bridges. I see you took the advice and removed the return edges from the bottoms (NICE WORK) but you may want to try a hot-water bath to widen the openings a bit. It should take all of 5 minutes and would give you a more refined look. If you need advice on this, just PM me. Lastly, the issue with your blaster will hold you up from Centurion: Again, as per the CRL for level 3: ..."T-Tracks and grips shall have the appearance of black plastic". The original T-tracks were made from black plastic, and therefore could not have a metallic appearance as yours do. Some flat (or satin) spray paint could fix this in about 2 minutes! Please add an updated photo of the t tracks and one unobstructed shot of the grip to your application. Thanks!! Reference images 2 Quote
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted October 16, 2019 Report Posted October 16, 2019 Way to go, Denis!! 1 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted October 16, 2019 Report Posted October 16, 2019 Nice work, you may just want to check your end cap widths and cover plate width, looks a tad long. I would also just round the corners on the TD brackets as they may catch when attaching them behind the belt You may want to tidy up the vocoder a little, one side is lower than the other Good luck with approval 1 Quote
msouza[TK] Posted October 22, 2019 Report Posted October 22, 2019 Sorry to be such a stickler but one last thing before we "move along" Looks as if your forearms return edge could use a little more work with the Dremel and as Joseph pointed out Per the CRL "No return edge on the inside of the front of the forearm is allowed." Once you post up new photos of them we can continue. Reference Photo 1 Quote
Denis09[TK] Posted October 22, 2019 Author Report Posted October 22, 2019 I'm on vacation. That's why I won't post the change until Friday 1 Quote
msouza[TK] Posted October 25, 2019 Report Posted October 25, 2019 On 10/22/2019 at 3:43 AM, Denis09 said: I'm on vacation. That's why I won't post the change until Friday Enjoy the rest of your vacation!! 1 Quote
Denis09[TK] Posted October 26, 2019 Author Report Posted October 26, 2019 (edited) Hello, I am back again. Here are the improvements. There is no return edge Edited October 26, 2019 by Denis09 2 Quote
msouza[TK] Posted November 4, 2019 Report Posted November 4, 2019 Hi Denis, Thanks for your application for Centurion, always great to see your fellow troopers go for our highest level! CRL and Centurion Application Requirements All required photos are now in and, after review, we are pleased to welcome you to Centurion! On behalf of the DO team and myself, many congratulations! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly In this area we discuss areas that could benefit from additional improvement. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions. And just like your EIB application we'll work from the top down. Lets start by taken a look at the traps on your helmet. I'm not sure if its the angle & lighting but it seams to be creeping up over the radius edges. Take a look at the photo of yours vs the screen used bucket and you'll see what i'm referencing. Reference Photos Next up well move on to your shoulders. Great job on taken Josephs advise you really got them where they need to be. What I'm talking about is the alignment of your right bicep to help you get that right up against your chest armor. While dressing just do a double check that the raised ridge on the bicep is lined up with the ridge on the shoulder,this should bring them in that last bit to give you that just stepped out of the Imperial Propaganda Poster look. Reference Photo I'll also point out that it looks as if you could use to pull up/down on your sleeves a bits as well or it might have gotten caught on the elbow. Again just a quick once over before stepping out into the Emperors Lineup . Lastly I'm going to point out your calves and again its just a simple alignment and making sure you look your absolute best and ready for Lord Vader's Inspection. The right one is spot on but the left could be in a little bit. Again its a simple look in the mirror or having your handler giving you a once over to make sure everything is in place. Reference Photo That should do it, great job on making the adjustment that your fellow troopers called out, the smallest detail can make a huge difference, congratulations & welcome to Centurion Trooper. 1 Quote
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted November 4, 2019 Report Posted November 4, 2019 Great Denis, Congratulations Trooper !!! Welcome to Centurion. 1 Quote
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted November 4, 2019 Report Posted November 4, 2019 Congratulations trooper 1 Quote
Denis09[TK] Posted November 4, 2019 Author Report Posted November 4, 2019 I look forward to Thank you very much for your help and support. I will pay attention to the other details again and edit them. Special thanks again to Freduster for the help 1 Quote
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