TK-25280 requesting ESB EIB Status [AFP] [928]

[TxuTxi[TK]]

 

TK -25280 Request the status of ESB EIB [AFP]

 

Soldier Information

• Name: Jesús Pérez
• FISD Forum Name: TxuTxi (I recently changed my nickname from "drjpp" to "TxuTxi")
• Legion ID: 25280
• Garnison: Spanish Garnish
• Legion Profile:  https://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=30566  
• Height: 169 cm
• Weight: 176 lbs / 80kg

Costume Information

• Armor Maker: AFP (Armor Factory Props) / ABS
• Helmet Maker: AFP (Armor Factory Props) / ABS
• Neck seal: AFP (Armor Factory Props)
• Belt: AFP (Armor Factory Props) / ABS 
• Boots: AFP (Armor Factory Props) 
• Holster: AFP (Armor Factory Props) 
• Blaster: E-11 Resin / AFP Selfmade Rubber  (Armor Factory Props)

 

 

I apologize but I didn't have a uniform background

 

Trooper Details:

 

Front

 

 

Back

 

 

Left arm raised

 

 

Left

 

 

Right arm raised

 

 

Right

 

 

 

In action

 

 

Ab / Kidney Gap  Detail :

 

Left

 

 

 

 

Right

 

 

Manual plate detail

 

 

 

Boots

 

 

Blaster E-11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Neck seal

 

 

Holster

 

 

 

Ammo Belt

 

 

Thermal Detonator

 

 

Helmet

 

 

Hovi mic detail:

 

 

 

Lens color

 

 

Body details

 

 

 

 

Sniper Plate Details

 

 

 

 

 

Thigh Ammo Strip

 

 

Rivet connection inside thigh 

 

 

Edited August 4, 2019 by TxuTxi

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Nice work, you may want to add inside of the thigh ammo rivets, good luck

[TxuTxi[TK]]

Nice work, you may want to add inside of the thigh ammo rivets, good luck

Thanks!!

This rivets?

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/b96AIm48g52De4y8jfYxGNOyD_PIAgqsjlUisrrPC-hLDEbj2dKELJ98MX-PqGDt6KPtQ3nSPu6RxC1Ys8Cd9J4FWijDNlSmzdZzX5Nf6i1qn9hauhhcmL6dwTVQHkT_-D4tqFVvKI94zHrBpNMYqiZ24hcHuY-2lr6qFpSc_D7t3rLPJ4PEpO_QFmt8QNXdVx0Ogv96HRCaKCwywrTxTD_B4sHVF3lytLxNDOkoEGx7gBnzDFMgWfbh09NESeY1l2QrGttWnJFkVBwJRP8u-GIpIxwvEe2Z23UVnBhgF6BAIvFKrbj8IcMhdfTIFjKWPizM1Pg8ymgvNs2ZkQp4ulwTkz7EG0f8FG3bTpjayL_vEM-kmYGFECvzuc8pLZ3YzjTu7boVww3p1fplgCJjv4qHB0Lt_upQy6qNQ6395yQrO3ceYt6Q0fjvZgaCcEkrO8Z6JmV1hF-wSGKA8hZBBg4hJwOHp5Qyxk1VCDSdegAmv9cYre_tgnVKATlAZ6T-cU_6sNz583FhbkSGDNQ8hrIQUMluzcfxoyLnRa-iDvt7bgLQzLtYvpku_v9PJ5UbCQeS23pnlxQuC9brjxN4u6Bq2Oo6TboyCgxF14AO3GlKLyvzMQBRsulXtgHlsadWLGed1ZvM7UKAJQAwH849dNLIBtm3-z8O=w1125-h1500-no



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[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

58 minutes ago, TxuTxi said:

 

Thanks!!

This rivets?

 

Rivet connection inside thigh 

 

 

[TxuTxi[TK]]

7 hours ago, gmrhodes13 said:

Rivet connection inside thigh 

 

 

Thank you. I have updated the post with new suggested photos.

[TKSpartan[Staff]]

Excellent Jesús, Good luck with your application.

 

Excelente Jesús, Suerte !! 

[TxuTxi[TK]]

Thank you very much for all the help you have given me.

 

If something else is needed, I will be happy to perform the necessary tasks for my evaluation.

 

Waiting for the call to duty

[Sly11[Admin]]

Looks good, best of luck with your review


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[TxuTxi[TK]]

Hi!!!!!

 

Updated with new photos of:
-Lens color
-Detail of thermal detonator

 

If you need anything else for the evaluation do not hesitate to contact me.
I will be happy to help. 

 

 

 

[TheSwede[TK]]

Hi Jesús

Thank you for your EIB application - just hang in there while we work through the list

[shashachu[TK]]

Hi Jesus!

 

Great to see another ESB application.

 

For EIB, the crl says:

 

Any gap between the abdomen and kidney armor is no more than 1/2" (12.5mm) wide.

 

It appears your ab/kidney gap is too large. Can you post updated photos showing a smaller gap? I think it may just be that you can get there by tightening your belt, or tightening up some of the strapping connecting the ab and kidney.

 

Thanks,

Sha Sha

[TxuTxi[TK]]

6 hours ago, shashachu said:

Hi Jesus!

 

Great to see another ESB application.

 

For EIB, the crl says:

 

Any gap between the abdomen and kidney armor is no more than 1/2" (12.5mm) wide.

 

It appears your ab/kidney gap is too large. Can you post updated photos showing a smaller gap? I think it may just be that you can get there by tightening your belt, or tightening up some of the strapping connecting the ab and kidney.

 

Thanks,

Sha Sha

 

HI!

Thank you very much for your advice.

 

I have updated with detailed photos of Ab/Kidney Gap.

 

If you need more, do not hesitate to ask me.

 

Thank you!!!!

[TxuTxi[TK]]

On 8/2/2019 at 12:09 AM, TxuTxi said:

 

HI!

Thank you very much for your advice.

 

I have updated with detailed photos of Ab/Kidney Gap.

 

If you need more, do not hesitate to ask me.

 

Thank you!!!!

Hi there!  

I have updated the photos of the union of the abdomen with the kidney plate.

I have placed my belt better and I have achieved an optimal placement of the armor.

Thanks to the colleagues for their advice !!!!!!

[shashachu[TK]]

12 hours ago, TxuTxi said:

Hi there!  

I have updated the photos of the union of the abdomen with the kidney plate.

I have placed my belt better and I have achieved an optimal placement of the armor.

Thanks to the colleagues for their advice !!!!!!

Those photos look great!! Sorry for the trouble, but could you please also post new left and right side arms raised photos showing the fixed gap? You're almost there, Jesús!

[TxuTxi[TK]]

18 hours ago, shashachu said:

Those photos look great!! Sorry for the trouble, but could you please also post new left and right side arms raised photos showing the fixed gap? You're almost there, Jesús!

Updated!!!

 

Thank you Sha Sha!!!!!

Edited August 4, 2019 by TxuTxi

[TxuTxi[TK]]

On 8/4/2019 at 12:21 PM, TxuTxi said:

Updated!!!

 

Thank you Sha Sha!!!!!

 

On 8/4/2019 at 5:31 AM, shashachu said:

Those photos look great!! Sorry for the trouble, but could you please also post new left and right side arms raised photos showing the fixed gap? You're almost there, Jesús!

Hello friends!

If you need any more photos do not hesitate to ask. I am happy to help.

Hugs!!!

[Aizenoso[TK]]

Come on Jesús, you got this!! Buena suerte tío!

[shashachu[TK]]

On 8/6/2019 at 12:24 AM, TxuTxi said:

 

Hello friends!

If you need any more photos do not hesitate to ask. I am happy to help.

Hugs!!!

Hi Jesus! Thanks for your patience. Your armor is in review and since we all discuss every application together, it sometimes takes a few days for us to get all the feedback. I appreciate your enthusiasm! We will be with you soon.

[TxuTxi[TK]]

5 hours ago, shashachu said:

Hi Jesus! Thanks for your patience. Your armor is in review and since we all discuss every application together, it sometimes takes a few days for us to get all the feedback. I appreciate your enthusiasm! We will be with you soon.

 Thank you Sha Sha!!!!!!

Edited August 7, 2019 by TxuTxi

[shashachu[TK]]

766. https://www.whitearmor.net/forum/topic/47639-tk-25280-requesting-esb-eib-status-afp/

Posted by TxuTxi 28//7-19

 

Hi Jesús!

Thanks for your application and for the updated photos with the corrected side gaps. They look great now!

 

CRL and EIB Application Requirements

All required photos are now in and, after review, we are pleased to welcome you to Expert Infantry rank. On behalf of the DO team and myself, many congratulations!  

 

Other-Armor Fit/Assembly

In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions. Just a note for your review: I will do my best to use ESB armor as reference images, but occasionally I do use ANH armor since ESB was mostly re-used ANH armor, and there are a lot fewer ESB references available.

 

Starting from the top, some of your helmet decals are a bit creased. It would really help you look your best if you were able to replace them with new smoothed-out decals.

 

 

Reference Image: 

 

 

Next, your teeth gaps are quite a bit larger than the screen-used helmets. It would not be easy, but if you filled them in some with ABS paste, it would really help your helmet match the screen-used ones.

 

 

Reference Images:

 

 

Continuing on to the Thermal Detonator, ideally the screws sit closer to the end of the clips. This would involve replacing the clips and is not a big deal, but it's worth mentioning.

 

 

Reference Image:

 

Next, your thigh armor seems a bit low. Ideally we want to minimize the amount of black showing, but if there is black showing, it looks cleaner if the gaps are even. You have no gap at the knees but quite a large gap at the top of your thighs. If you are able to, we're recommending you raise your thighs a bit. That will also keep your sniper knee from getting caught behind the thigh armor.

 

  

 

Reference Image:

 

Finally, your butt place is popping out a bit. Ideally it should sit right under the kidney plate, so we're recommending that you try adjusting the strapping in that area to get it to sit properly.

 

  

 

Reference Image:

 

Centurion Requirements

In this section we prepare you for Centurion. More photos may be requested in the future that allow us to make better decisions on possible adjustments. If there are any areas of concern they will be discussed here.

Because Centurion photos show much more detail than EIB, items to pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here. We try to point out all that we can from what is seen, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper.

 

Starting from the top, the paint on your ear bumps is quite thing, so we'd like you to make it wider to match the screen-used armor. Although this isn't specifically stated in the CRL, the references images are clear and it should be a simple fix.

 

 

Reference Images:

  

 

Moving on to the shoulder armor, the L3 CRL states:

• There should be a minimal gap between the shoulder armor and the chest/back plates.

 

Yours look quite good, but there is still some gap, especially at the top of the bells. You can tighten the strapping holding the bells on, and also be sure to trim all the return edge off the bottom of the bells to bring them as close to the chest and back as possible.

 

Reference Image:

 

It's not totally clear, but it appears your forearms still have a bit of return edge on the wrist side. Per the L3 CRL:

 

• No return edge on the inside of the front of the forearm is allowed.

 

It should be a simple fix - just a few minutes with some scissors to clean up the edges.

 

 

Reference Images:

 

Next, a couple fixes will need to be made in the ab/kidney area.

 

Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor. Abdominal and Kidney Plate align horizontally at top.

Rivets are equally spaced along the depth of the armor and about 10mm from the edge.

• The heads are rounded or domed. Note: Paperclip brads are not considered to have a domed head.
• Rivets are painted white.

 

This is almost certainly just a dressing issue, but the tops of the ab and kidney will need to be aligned, and the top pair of ab/kidney rivets will need to be painted white.

 

  

 

Reference Images:

 

And that's it! Congratulations on your EIB approval, and we'll see you at Centurion! Now get out there and make us proud!

[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Congratulations trooper and welcome to the EI ranks

[giskard8[Staff]]

Congratulations trooper, welcome to the EIB!

[Aizenoso[TK]]

Congratulations Txutxi!!! 

[TKSpartan[Staff]]

Congratulations Trooper, Welcome to EIB, just minor adjustment for your next goal. Centurion. Don't stop your great job!! 

 

Felicitaciones Jesús, Bienvenido ! solo unos pocos ajustes  y alcanza el siguiente nivel, Centurion.  Recuerda, para Centurion solo 3 o 4 ajustes y lo demás lo puedes ir corrigiendo en el camino.  Buen trabajo!!! 

[TxuTxi[TK]]

Thank you very much to all!!! I am very happy to belong to this select group. I promise to carry the EIB emblems with maximum pride. And I will not stay here. The next Centurion !!


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