Forossa requesting pre-approval review

[TK11057[TK]]

Apology in advance, I don’t how to delete my old topic (please let me know if there’s a way to update your topic). Thanks for all the help and suggestions. 

Thanks in advance

 

Name: Thor Nualsumlee

Armor type: Anovos, TM hero helmet, ATA shoulder straps

TK type: Hero ANH

 

 

Edited April 27, 2018 by Forossa

[sharkbait[TK]]

Looks pretty nice, there, trooper!  

 

The ammo belt/canvas belt should be directly below the ab buttons- yours is lying on top of the bottom.  

 

 

As to modifying your own posts, there's an "Edit" button at the bottom of your post, and if you just need to continue adding, you can always just reply to the thread.  

[TK11057[TK]]

fixed the belt, how could i have missed that. thank you

[Neb Sgird[TK]]

Looking good trooper! If I was your GML, you would be approved as is. 

 

A few little things

• The cover strips on your biceps are a tad too long. Trim them to be in line with the bicep itself. 
• Your forearms seem a bit long for your body. I can especially notice this when your handguards slip into them a bit in your "at attention" picture
• Your thighs could probably be pulled up a tad.

 

[lucnak[TK]]

Should be easy pass for basic approval! Agreed with the other comments. Also looks like there is still some return edge at the wrist which you could remove not just for comfort, but for accuracy! Not a requirement though.

[justjoseph63[Staff]]

Really nice job on that Anovos armor, Thor!  Although it won't affect basic approval, I would suggest ditching the canvas belt that came with the kit.  It is really flimsy, and I would pick up something a little more heavy duty.  Doing this will also prevent the sag seen below, and give you a better overall appearance.  Let us know when you get your official TK number!