TK-27056 requesting ANH stunt EIB status (SDS) [799]

[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Good morning,

Please find enclosed my request for EIB. Many thanks for your time

PERSONAL DETAILS

Name: Lionel Noronha Gallardo

FISD Nick: Pipertrooper

TK ID: TK-27056

Armor:  SDS ANH stunt 

Garrison: Spanish Garrison

 

ARMOR DETAILS:

Armor maker: SDS

Helmet maker: SDS

Blaster type  :SDS

Height: 170 cm

Weight: 80kg

Boots maker: CK 

Canvas belt: traumtrooper

Hand plates: SDS

Electronics:1506+ICOMM

Neck seal: traumtrooper

Holster maker: traumtrooper

 

PICTURES:

 

Aker

 

 

 

 

 

[CableGuy[Admin]]

Looking great. Best of luck with your application. :-)


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[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Looking great. Best of luck with your application. :-)


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Thanks mate...

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[Poseidon[501st]]

Overall it looks pretty sharp, but I did notice a few things.

 

Hovi mic tips need to be a bit weathered and white around the edges. Looks like your ear bumps are missing a black stripe, I can't really see one. Good work on the vocoder, it looks real sharp. Great work on the ears, there is almost no gap.

 

The ammo pack on your knee looks crooked, is it how your leg is positioned?

 

I would try to bring your shoulder bells in a little closer to your should strap. it looks like you have about a cm of gap, and that will bring your bells in closer to your body.

 

Has the back of your helmet been trimmed evenly? In the rear helmet picture and the rear body shot it looks like the left rear side is significantly larger than the right side.

 

Not a real comment, but your TD clips have pretty squared edges. You might want to sand those down and round them a bit to avoid scratching your armour or yourself. Love the belt, your side gaps look great. Your clips could be tighter as well, it looks like they aren't flush all the way around.

[acetilacetato[TK]]

Good job trooper

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[Telmo[TK]]

Good luck Lio, you did a good job.


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[ToniML[TK]]

Well done Lio!!

 

[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Well done Lio!!
 
:duim:

Cheers bossman!

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[Shanester[TK]]

Nice work trooper! Best of luck with approvals! 

[Oki[TK]]

Great work my brother! I will welcome you to the rank very soon. 

Cheers

[Traumtrooper[TK]]

Good luck in this journey to the glory of being Centurion!

 

Good job bro

[agm.bobafett[501st]]

Hello, LIO.....
very good work with the armor
See you bro

[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

On 10/1/2018 at 6:04 PM, Poseidon said:

Overall it looks pretty sharp, but I did notice a few things.

 

Hovi mic tips need to be a bit weathered and white around the edges. Looks like your ear bumps are missing a black stripe, I can't really see one. Good work on the vocoder, it looks real sharp. Great work on the ears, there is almost no gap.

 

The ammo pack on your knee looks crooked, is it how your leg is positioned?

 

I would try to bring your shoulder bells in a little closer to your should strap. it looks like you have about a cm of gap, and that will bring your bells in closer to your body.

 

Has the back of your helmet been trimmed evenly? In the rear helmet picture and the rear body shot it looks like the left rear side is significantly larger than the right side.

 

Not a real comment, but your TD clips have pretty squared edges. You might want to sand those down and round them a bit to avoid scratching your armour or yourself. Love the belt, your side gaps look great. Your clips could be tighter as well, it looks like they aren't flush all the way around.

Thanks for the feedback  Poseidon but some of your suggestions are not under the EIB CRL, am I right here?, but i would definitely look into these details as soon I get to apply to centurion.

Cheers buddy !

[Poseidon[501st]]

22 hours ago, Lionel Noronha Gallardo said:

Thanks for the feedback  Poseidon but some of your suggestions are not under the EIB CRL, am I right here?, but i would definitely look into these details as soon I get to apply to centurion.

Cheers buddy !

On ‎1‎/‎10‎/‎2018 at 9:04 AM, Poseidon said:

Overall it looks pretty sharp, but I did notice a few things.

 

Hovi mic tips need to be a bit weathered and white around the edges. Looks like your ear bumps are missing a black stripe, I can't really see one. Good work on the vocoder, it looks real sharp. Great work on the ears, there is almost no gap.

 

The ammo pack on your knee looks crooked, is it how your leg is positioned?

 

I would try to bring your shoulder bells in a little closer to your should strap. it looks like you have about a cm of gap, and that will bring your bells in closer to your body.

 

Has the back of your helmet been trimmed evenly? In the rear helmet picture and the rear body shot it looks like the left rear side is significantly larger than the right side.

 

Not a real comment, but your TD clips have pretty squared edges. You might want to sand those down and round them a bit to avoid scratching your armour or yourself. Love the belt, your side gaps look great. Your clips could be tighter as well, it looks like they aren't flush all the way around.

No worries man, I think I got to wrapped up in Centurion submission, so I didn't mean to steer you wrong. I may have gotten overzealous in my attempt to help.

 

Helmet -

Looks like ear bump stripe is a requirement for Centurion, not EIB (whoops)

Hovi Mic tips - Not explicitly on the EIB requirements, but I have seen it referenced (up to you)

Back trimmed evenly - Again, not explicitly on EIB, so its your call. I might not be seeing the picture right

 

Shoulder bells closer-  I have seen this called out on EIB submissions, but its not explicitly on the CRL. Your approver will let you know

 

Knee Ammo Pack - I might not be seeing the picture right, so I didn't know.

 

TD Clips -  All the reference pictures I have seen has the clips tight to the TD tube, but it falls yet again into up to you.

Don't take my comments for anything other than surface value, your kit does look really sharp. I'm just trying to help.

 

 

 

 

[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

No worries man, I think I got to wrapped up in Centurion submission, so I didn't mean to steer you wrong. I may have gotten overzealous in my attempt to help.
 
Helmet -
Looks like ear bump stripe is a requirement for Centurion, not EIB (whoops)
Hovi Mic tips - Not explicitly on the EIB requirements, but I have seen it referenced (up to you)
Back trimmed evenly - Again, not explicitly on EIB, so its your call. I might not be seeing the picture right
 
Shoulder bells closer-  I have seen this called out on EIB submissions, but its not explicitly on the CRL. Your approver will let you know
 
Knee Ammo Pack - I might not be seeing the picture right, so I didn't know.
 
TD Clips -  All the reference pictures I have seen has the clips tight to the TD tube, but it falls yet again into up to you.

Don't take my comments for anything other than surface value, your kit does look really sharp. I'm just trying to help.
 
 
 
 

No offence taken buddy. But thanks for the pointers. I can see where were you coming from. It is good to hear these tips to improve our armor. Again thanks for the tips

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[pistolero[TK]]

Good job Brother!!!

 (Estoy deseando verte tropear con la alegria de el hombre de campo por tu EIB).

[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Good job Brother!!!
 (Estoy deseando verte tropear con la alegria de el hombre de campo por tu EIB).

Grasias brodel...ahorasita mismo voy a labral el campo...

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[ukswrath[Staff]]

Hey Lionel thanks for your patience, Andrew or myself will be with you shortly

[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Hey Lionel thanks for your patience, Andrew or myself will be with you shortly

Be gentel....;0)

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[ukswrath[Staff]]

Sorry for the delay, almost there 

[ukswrath[Staff]]

Hey Lionel, welcome thank you for your patience and EIB application. Let's get started 

CRL and EIB Application Requirements:

All submission photos have been posted and we have great news, your armor displays all the necessary elements to qualify for Expert Infantry. Congratulations!       

 

Other-Armor Fit/Assembly:

In this section we review observations made by your fellow troopers and ourselves. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. We have a few minor suggestions to mention here. Areas to work on to enhance the overall accuracy and look of your armor. Starting at the shoulders and working our way down there should be little gap between them and the chest and back plates. Though the front looks great the back view has a bit more gap. Judging by how much space you have remaining between the bells and biceps a simple strapping adjustment should do the trick.

 

Reference photo

 

Next up arm alignment. The biceps and forearm cover strips should aim forward and back. This could be a simple photo issue.

 

Reference photo

 

Back plate is overlapping your Kidney, it should rest above it. Another simple strapping adjustment should do the trick.

 

Reference photo

 

 

Ab right side male snap. This snap should be closer to the top corner as seen in the reference photo.

 

Reference photo

 

Posterior is overlapping the kidney. It should reside just below it as seen in the reference photo.

 

Reference photo

 

Next up the Thermal Detonator clips look loose. We couldn't help notice the gap between the clips and tube and wanted to make sure this area was secure preventing a malfunction while trooping. 

 

Reference photo

 

Ammo belt left mount is incorrect. The left or inside rivet should be higher up in the corner and the top of the belt lower closer to the lever of the lower thigh return edge as illustrated. This will undoubtly require you to reposition the rivet and fill the hole. That said the accuracy of the armor is ultimately up to you. 

 

Reference photo

 

Finally, so we're pretty sure there's a cover strip on your right rear thigh (why wouldn't there be right) but we're having difficulty seeing it. If you choose to shoot for Centurion if you could post a good photo of the area it would be nice. Also the right calf closure is overlapping the inner half where it should not as seen with your left calf. 

 

 

 

Centurion Suggestions:

Because Centurion photos show much more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here. We try to point out all we can from what is seen but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. From what we can see the only areas holding you back from Centurion are the helmet decals and the waist belt to drop box alignment. Starting with the helmet for Centurion the traps and vents will need to be painted or "Hand painted" looking decals used. 

For level three certification (if applicable):

·         Tears/traps shall be hand painted or use decals that emulate hand painted (with correct ANH TK details).

 

Reference photo

 

Next up waist belt to drop box alignment. They should be aligned with the outer most edge of the ammo belt and just below it with little to no gap. In one image one side looks aligned while the other side is out of sorts. This could be a simple photo issue but worth mention. 

 

For level three certification (if applicable):

 

• Drop boxes are vertically aligned with the end of the ammo belt with minimal gap between belt and box.

 

Reference photo

 

Lastly, left Kidney to Ab gap. The CRL states. Yours is a bit too much and require some adjustments to reduce the gap for Centurion 

For level three certification (if applicable):
·   Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor.

 

Reference photo

 

That's it congratulations on a great build . We hope to see you next year at Centurion.

[Traumtrooper[TK]]

Enhorabuena campeón!!! Te lo dije!!!


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[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Enhorabuena campeón!!! Te lo dije!!!


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De puta madre!!??

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[Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK]]

Hey Lionel, welcome thank you for your patience and EIB application. Let's get started 
CRL and EIB Application Requirements:
All submission photos have been posted and we have great news, your armor displays all the necessary elements to qualify for Expert Infantry. Congratulations!       
 
Other-Armor Fit/Assembly:
In this section we review observations made by your fellow troopers and ourselves. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. We have a few minor suggestions to mention here. Areas to work on to enhance the overall accuracy and look of your armor. Starting at the shoulders and working our way down there should be little gap between them and the chest and back plates. Though the front looks great the back view has a bit more gap. Judging by how much space you have remaining between the bells and biceps a simple strapping adjustment should do the trick.

 
Reference photo

 
Next up arm alignment. The biceps and forearm cover strips should aim forward and back. This could be a simple photo issue.
 
Reference photo

 
Back plate is overlapping your Kidney, it should rest above it. Another simple strapping adjustment should do the trick.


 
Reference photo     Ab right side male snap. This snap should be closer to the top corner as seen in the reference photo.   Reference photo   Posterior is overlapping the kidney. It should reside just below it as seen in the reference photo.   Reference photo   Next up the Thermal Detonator clips look loose. We couldn't help notice the gap between the clips and tube and wanted to make sure this area was secure preventing a malfunction while trooping.    Reference photo   Ammo belt left mount is incorrect. The left or inside rivet should be higher up in the corner and the top of the belt lower closer to the lever of the lower thigh return edge as illustrated. This will undoubtly require you to reposition the rivet and fill the hole. That said the accuracy of the armor is ultimately up to you.    Reference photo  
Finally, so we're pretty sure there's a cover strip on your right rear thigh (why wouldn't there be right) but we're having difficulty seeing it. If you choose to shoot for Centurion if you could post a good photo of the area it would be nice. Also the right calf closure is overlapping the inner half where it should not as seen with your left calf.     

 

Centurion Suggestions:

Because Centurion photos show much more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here. We try to point out all we can from what is seen but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. From what we can see the only areas holding you back from Centurion are the helmet decals and the waist belt to drop box alignment. Starting with the helmet for Centurion the traps and vents will need to be painted or "Hand painted" looking decals used. 
For level three certification (if applicable):
·         Tears/traps shall be hand painted or use decals that emulate hand painted (with correct ANH TK details).

 
Reference photo


 
Next up waist belt to drop box alignment. They should be aligned with the outer most edge of the ammo belt and just below it with little to no gap. In one image one side looks aligned while the other side is out of sorts. This could be a simple photo issue but worth mention. 
 
For level three certification (if applicable):
 

• Drop boxes are vertically aligned with the end of the ammo belt with minimal gap between belt and box.

  Reference photo   Lastly, left Kidney to Ab gap. The CRL states. Yours is a bit too much and require some adjustments to reduce the gap for Centurion  For level three certification (if applicable):
·   Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor.

 
Reference photo

  That's it congratulations on a great build . We hope to see you next year at Centurion.

Thankyou so much for your sugestions. I will get to work on these straight away. Soooo happy !!

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[gmrhodes13[Staff]]

Congratulations trooper and welcome to the EI ranks