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Name = David "Penguin" White

ID = TK-8453

Forum name = niugnep

Garrison = Bast Alpha

Armor = AP

Helmet = AP

Blaster = Hyperfirm

Height = 6'

Weight = 170 lbs

Boots = TKBoots

Canvas Belt = Rob Kittel

Hand Plates = Trooperbay

Electronics = Aker

Neckseal = Nikkimat

Undersuit = Under Armor

Holster = AP

TD clips = Jesse McClear

Lenses = Trooperbay

Mic Tips = Trooperbay

 

I've done a significant amount of work since my EIB application (about a week ago). I've also used some of the pictures from my EIB application where I thought the picture was sufficient and nothing had changed.

 

Bucket off (with hat)

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Bucket on - Front

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Bucket on - Left Side Arms raised

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Bucket on - Right side arms raised

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Bucket on - Back

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Action Shot

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Bucket - Front

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Bucket - left side

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Bucket - back

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Bucket - Right side

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Hovi Tips

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S-trim

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Green lenses and correct teeth

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6 Ab Rivets

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Male Snap on Ab Plate

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Crotch Rivet and Snaps

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Shoulder straps glued at front

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White fabric connection and free floating shoulder straps

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Elastic bands at shoulder straps

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No return edge on inside front of forearm

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Rubber gloves with painted latex hand plates

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Separate kidney plate

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Trimmed belt corners and back of drop box

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Holster attachment to belt

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TD front

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TD back

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Right thigh pack attached with painted rivets

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No visible rivets attaching sniper plate to greave - right side

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Left side of sniper plate

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Front of boots - no seam

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Scuffs on boots

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Blaster - left side

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Blaster - right side

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Thank you!

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Well I think the Top hat Pic should be worth Bonus Points anyway... :P

 

I see really only one thing that might catch you up:

 

The helmet decals do not seem to simulate hand painting, but maybe if you could say what brand they are (I am pretty sure the stock AP decals are "computer clean") you could prove me wrong. (the traps and tears)

 

and possibly:

 

I think you did a pretty good Job on the shims, but it will be up to the DO to decide if they are "seamless" enough (believe me I feel your pain I had to add 2.5 inches on mine...you get sooooo tired of sanding....)

 

 

These are suggestions as I do not see anything in the CRL about them but it is something I noticed:

 

The Velcro forearms do meet the letter of the CRL with them being fully closed, but you might think of glueing them as it will make the seam less "fat"

 

 

The Belt seems to be down a bit, it usually sits just a little below if not just on top of the Ab Button details, Granted there is NOTHING I can find in the CRL that says you have to do this, but it is how the Screen TKs wore theirs and you might think of hitching it up and seeing how you like it on future suit ups.

 

Overall I think its a great build that fits you well and as previously stated the top hat pic is pure win...You need to get Mathias's Painter friend to paint that pic...

Posted

I can't see the details since I'm in the car looking on my phone (no worries, i got a driver lol), but from what I can see, I think the armor fits you very well. Good luck with the application :)

Posted
Yep the helmet stickers and velcroed forearms seemed to draw my eye too...

Agreed.

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Posted

+1 also your shoulder straps look a litte lop sided in the back shot, are they held with strapping or elastic, should be elastic. Should have a clear view of your D ring. Sniper plate not quite following your shin but may be ok. Just need a couple of tweaks, good luck with approval

Posted

Sniper plate not quite following your shin but may be ok.

I may be overlooking it but what exactly do you mean? Doesn't look too bad from where I'm looking but, again, I could be looking at something else..

Posted

The top hat reminded me of this print I bought at a craft fair over the summer.

 

 

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Posted

I may be overlooking it but what exactly do you mean? Doesn't look too bad from where I'm looking but, again, I could be looking at something else..

Can see a lot of the shin, looks as if the sniper plate could have come up a bit on this side

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Posted

Can see a lot of the shin, looks as if the sniper plate could have come up a bit on this side

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I disagree. I think it's just fine. The armour doesn't permit the knee plate sitting any higher since the ridges are in the way. But the decals and velcroed forearms are show stoppers in my opinion.

Posted (edited)

Can see a lot of the shin, looks as if the sniper plate could have come up a bit on this side

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Do the holster straps need to be changed for Centurion? I notice they're ESB black, not ANH tan.

 

EDIT: nevermind, see my thread http://www.whitearmo...ter-loop-color/

Edited by 8BitBry
Posted

Damn. I'm utterly embarrassed. I fixed the forearms. I just always did it that way, but that's no excuse. I apologize for the oversight.

 

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Just show that they are indeed now glued. Now to just clean up some e6000. ;)

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As for the helmet. The CRL says that I can use decals that emulate hand painted... a thought occurred to me that perhaps I could paint decals. So, I submit to the community:

 

The lines themselves, I just painted over with a very fine brush freehand. The outlines, I used tape to protect from my shaky hands.

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A wider view of the process

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New front view

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New left side view

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New back view

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New right side view

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Thank you again!

Posted

Looking much better :)

Posted

See my comment in the other centurion thread where he did the same tho his decals. I feel that it applies to yours as well: http://www.whitearmor.net/forum/topic/22493-tk-27555-requesting-anh-stunt-centurion-status/page__st__20#entry281394

 

While technically permitted, I feel that this is not a method that should be encouraged. Either take the time to paint it all, or pony up the extra $20 dollars or so for proper decals.

Posted

+1 also your shoulder straps look a litte lop sided in the back shot, are they held with strapping or elastic, should be elastic. Should have a clear view of your D ring. Sniper plate not quite following your shin but may be ok. Just need a couple of tweaks, good luck with approval

 

It's held down with elastic. I don't specifically see what you mention, but perhaps I need to take a heat gun to them again for a little more bend.

 

The D-ring was in my EIB application... Sorry about the oversight...

 

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Posted (edited)

See my comment in the other centurion thread where he did the same tho his decals. I feel that it applies to yours as well: http://www.whitearmo..._20#entry281394

 

While technically permitted, I feel that this is not a method that should be encouraged. Either take the time to paint it all, or pony up the extra $20 dollars or so for proper decals.

 

Already ordered from trooperbay. :duim:

 

This is merely a stopgap... and I do think it looks better.

 

And yes, they're AP decals.

Edited by niugnep
Posted

Already ordered from trooperbay. :duim:

 

This is merely a stopgap... and I do think it looks better.

Very good. In the meantime I suggest working on cover strip assembly on the forearms as well, since I'm not approving this request before the decals are replaced anyway. And the cover strip assembly is something we voted on recently and that passed with a big majority so that should count as a requirement as well. If not per CRL, see it as a personal improvement.

Posted

Very good. In the meantime I suggest working on cover strip assembly on the forearms as well, since I'm not approving this request before the decals are replaced anyway. And the cover strip assembly is something we voted on recently and that passed with a big majority so that should count as a requirement as well. If not per CRL, see it as a personal improvement.

 

Not a problem. :)

 

Can I ask, is there anything else besides these two points that I need to work on?

Posted

Not a problem. :)

 

Can I ask, is there anything else besides these two points that I need to work on?

Excellent. :)

 

Cover strip assembly on all limbs except back of shins (I just noticed your biceps looks like overlap)

 

If you're asking me for nit picking details then this is what I would change:

Take away a little more of the front forearm so there is absolutely no return, even in the corners where the ridge with the dents in it meet the edge.

Trim the return of the knee plate slimmer. Roughly half of current "thickness".

Cut off the other half of the holster straps so there is no loop, just a single strap.

Replace white shoulder webbing with white elastic.

Drill/cut out the sides of the blaster front sight so it's open to the sides like the original sterling, and drill out a bit of the barrel to give it some depth.

Sand/polish some more on the seam where your shim is to hide the seam better.

Replace the mic tips with some that has more accurate (tighter) mesh.

Assemble biceps slimmer. Looks like you have a lot of space inside them compared to the thickness of your arm.

Posted

Can see a lot of the shin, looks as if the sniper plate could have come up a bit on this side

 

 

 

Thanks for the explanation.. yeah this is actually an AP problem.. if you look closely to the AP's you'll see more have it.

Posted

Thanks for the explanation.. yeah this is actually an AP problem.. if you look closely to the AP's you'll see more have it.

 

This. I've read some have used heat to bring the wings a little closer into the shin.

Posted (edited)

This. I've read some have used heat to bring the wings a little closer into the shin.

I had to do this with my ATA shin, just looked lop sided and I wasn't happy with it. But it's a personal thing not required for approval by the looks of it.

Edited by gmrhodes13
Posted

Thanks for the explanation.. yeah this is actually an AP problem.. if you look closely to the AP's you'll see more have it.

Thanks will keep that in mind for future reference :)

Posted (edited)

Whew. So, I've taken some time to fix the issues that have been raised. And sorry about the delay, this would have been faster but I show to work on...

  • "Dave M" decals on the helmet now
  • Cover strip assembly on all forearms and biceps
  • Took away more of the return edge of front forearms
  • Trimmed biceps circumference by 1/2"
  • Cut off other half of holster strap so there is no loop, just single strap
  • Made sniper plate more flush with left shin

Thank you for your time. :)

 

Front

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Left Side

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Back

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Right Side

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Helmet - Detail

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Forearms

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Biceps

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Holster

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Sniper Plate - Left Side

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Sniper Plate - Right Side

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Edited by niugnep

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