That's funny because when I saw you thermal detonator I thought it looked like a TM one. Glad to see my eye is still sharp.
Honestly it looks good, but I can't help myself to think there's something off with the chest plate. And I will have to add to the others, the way you notched your thighs is too much. Yes, they are thighs in the film that are notched like that, but never extending over the bottom ridge where you fasten the ammo thigh pack.
Instead of going this far up on the thighs, why didn't you notch the top of your shins?
However, for anyone thinking about it, I do not recommand trimming the top of the thighs. In most case, it will look far worse. This is absolutely a last chance solution.
Also, your straps from biceps to forearm are mispositionned. They should be oriented towards the front instead of the back like you did.
Here's an original right arm for example: